Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Waiting - Part II

Monday, May 14, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Ethan's sick, and everyone is tense ... and the angst grows! Please comment, if you read, as I need your feedback! (And when all this is done, there will be fluff - I promise!)

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River lifted her head, like a wild animal scenting the air.

“Honey?” Jayne asked.

“Ethan.” She was on her feet and running towards the sickbay.

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“Give him to me.” Simon held out his hands as Freya and Mal stumbled down the stairs.

Freya handed her son over, and the doctor carried him into the infirmary. “He’s burning up, Simon. And I can’t wake him.”

Simon put the small boy on the medbed, grabbing different bits of equipment. “Open up his suit.”

Freya tried to oblige, but she couldn’t control the trembling in her fingers. Mal leaned past her, put his hands on hers, and moved them out of the way. He undid the small press-studs and revealed his son’s chest.

“Simon …” he said, his voice catching at the almost cherry aspect laid bare.

“Let me work.” He placed sensors on Ethan’s skin, then gently attached one to his finger.

“He was okay …” Freya said, wrapping her arms around herself. “The temperature had gone. And I looked in on him before …” She could hardly breathe. “Oh, God.”

Mal held her closely, feeling her heart beating wildly against his ribs.

River slipped into the infirmary unnoticed, and picked up the blanket from the side counter. Gently, almost without him being aware of it, she placed it around Mal’s bare shoulders. All his attention was on the still form of his son, lying like one of Bethany’s rag dolls on the medbed.

“What the diyu ’s going on?” Hank demanded, stepping into the common area from the cargo bay. “Kaylee demands Zoe goes into one of the shuttles, then …” His voice died away as he saw the activity in the infirmary. “ Shen sheng de gao wan ,” he whispered.

“Ethan,” Jayne said simply.

“Is it …”

“Don’t know yet.”

Simon was checking the readings. “His temperature’s way too high,” he said quietly, reaching into his supplies for a vial of milky liquid. He prepared a shot, then rapidly revised the amount taking into account the size of the patient, before stepping back to the bed. “This will bring it down,” he expl

Comments
Monday, 14 May 2007 12:17
Oh poor Mal and Frey! Poor Ethan! Poor everybody for the angst and torment of watching little Ethan in his life and death struggle. It isn't River's fault but it won't stop her blaming herself. Just hope they get to a hospital facility in time for a miracle. Whatever you do, please don't kill the baby! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 14 May 2007 12:57
Okay, now my heart hurts! Poor, poor Ethan and crew! Angst of the highest order! Write more immediately (and make it all better, for the love of God)!
Monday, 14 May 2007 16:27
Yikes! Poor Ethan, Mal and Freya, but more importantly, poor Simon! He doesn't take being helpless well!

This could be so bad!
Monday, 14 May 2007 19:26
Please let little Ethan recover. I know well the angst of a Mother with a sick child and it's horrible.
Tuesday, 15 May 2007 04:13
Oh god....please let Ethan recover without undue harm, Jane0904! Mal and Freya can't take another pile of angst landing on their chests....straw, meet the camel's back:(

Brilliant work here, my dear. Everyone involved was in character and I definitely have to feel for Mal, Freya, River and Zoe right now. The first two due to their struggles to not lose their sanity while their son fights for his life; River because she knows that she would have noticed Ethan's deteriorating condition faster than Bethany did had she been receptive; and Zoe must be going up the walls because of being unable to stand beside Mal in his (and Freya's) hour of need due to her own current condition.

BEB

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