Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Becoming

Sunday, May 13, 2007

A standalone tale of Mal's youth, and his first time ... Everyone who doesn't read OC's can read this, so please enjoy. Oh, and PG 13 verging on NC for naughtiness.
Just a little something while waiting for WAITING ...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3448    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Don’t see why,” Malcolm Reynolds said, brushing his hair and trying to press the cowlick at his crown into place. Never would stay, not unless his hair was longer’n his Ma would accept. Fourteen years old, nearly fifteen, and he still wasn’t allowed to decide how he should look without his Ma getting involved.

“Because it’s the law, Malcolm.” His mother moved in from the doorway, turning her son around so she could inspect him. “Everyone gets tested.” She smoothed out his collar.

“Still don’t see why. Ain’t planning on getting any more education, Ma. Know exactly what I’m gonna do with my life,” he added stubbornly.

She sighed. He was growing up, almost a man. In the last year he’d shot up and was taller than her now, and his voice wasn’t a boy’s no more. “What about your dreams about going out into the ‘verse?” she asked. “When you used to talk about seeing the stars …”

He shook his head. “That’s all they were, Ma. Dreams. Dreams of a kid, and I ain’t a kid no more.”

“Malcolm, just don’t try to grow up too fast.”

She was the only one ever called him Malcolm . Everyone else just called him Mal.

“I ain’t trying, Ma. I’m kinda doing that without any thought from me.” He looked down at her from his extra few inches, and wondered when she’d stop worrying about him. Prob’ly never. “’Sides, I can see the stars well enough from here.“ He smiled and bent forward, kissing her cheek. “Gotta go. Maddy’s waiting for me.”

He hurried down the stairs to the front door, feeling his mother at his heels. “You be careful with her,” his Ma said. “You know she only wants one thing.”

He was glad he had his back to her, because the blush that rose up his chest might have stopped at his neck, but she would have known. “Don’t know what you’re talking about, Ma,” he said, his mind skittering to that night last week, when they’d been down by the creek, and Maddy had let him touch her, just a little. He’d never … he took a deep breath. Then what she’d done to him …

“You know

Comments
Sunday, 13 May 2007 13:13
Excellent! You captured both a young Mal and his Ma so well.
Sunday, 13 May 2007 13:46
Interesting look at adolescent thought processes and their future effects. How did any of us ever survive them?
Sunday, 13 May 2007 18:12
I love this take on Mal and Mama! How appropriate for today!
Sunday, 13 May 2007 18:15
This was a cool little respite from all the angst you've been piling on! Thanks for sharing!
Sunday, 13 May 2007 23:14
I loved the interaction between Mal and Alice. I don't know why, but I love these stories from Mal's past. They're always so charming. I think it's kinda cool too, how a character we know so little about (Mal only mentioned his mother once, right?) captures our imagination. And even though we have such little evidence of what Mrs. Reynolds was like, we all seem to picture her the same way. I wonder why?
Monday, 14 May 2007 06:04
Maybe it's because my mind has been warped by your brilliant but angsty tales of drama involving Mal and company, but I definitely pictured the test Mal and Maddy took as being aptitude tests that the Academy uses to suss out potential candidates for their advanced programming. Can only say I thought this because of Mal's remarks to his mother about the lack of need (though they certainly mean something else) and the fact that two men that are never described oversee the test being taken;)

Still...gotta give you props for actually writing about how and when Mal lost his virginity. Certainly adds a new dimension on your version of Mal:D

BEB

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