Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Waiting

Saturday, May 12, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Amid some bedtime conversations, there is angst brewing. Please leave comments, as they really feed my muse!

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In the darkness of the nursery, Ethan tossed and turned, pushing back the bedclothes from his little body, sweat darkening his sleepsuit under his arms and around his back.

At the other end of the ship Bethany whimpered and hugged her Ethan doll to herself.

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Simon finished drying himself off and pulled on his pyjama pants. “So how do you know what Jayne smells like when he’s been drinking?” he asked, glancing at Kaylee who was lying in bed.

“What?”

“You said I smelled like Jayne. How did you know that?”

She smiled. “Jealous?”

“Of course.” He sat down on the edge of the bed. “I’m always jealous of anyone who has a history I don’t know about with my wife.”

“I could lie, you know.”

“You could. Would you?”

“No point.” She lay back, tracing patterns on his leg. “It was before you came on board. Not long before, but ... We were doing a job on Athens, and me and Jayne got separated from the Cap and Zoe, and ended up in this cave-in.” She held up a hand. “I ain’t gonna explain how we got there. It’s a sorry tale full of coincidences and unlikely happenstance, and it’s far too long to tell you now. Suffice it to say, we were caught. Only we had the goods our side, which wasn’t a bad thing, as some of it was some high class food and wine.” She smiled. “It didn’t take Jayne long to figure that out.”

“Wine?”

“Can still remember the label. Chateau Emile de Beauville .”

Simon’s jaw dropped. “ Emile de …”

“That good?”

“That’s … probably one of the most expensive wines there is. Even my father only had one bottle in his cellar.”

Kaylee giggled. “Well, truth to tell there’s about four less bottles in the ‘verse now than there were before me and Jayne.” She sighed happily. “Tasted nice though.”

“I’ve never … my father wouldn’t open it. He said it was an investment.”

“You mean I’ve had something rich that you ain’t?” Kaylee was openly delighted.

Emile de Beauville .” Simon shook his head. “I can’t believe it.”

“Jayne had t

Comments
Saturday, 12 May 2007 12:28
Oh, that was all kinds of foreboding! Can't wait for more!
Saturday, 12 May 2007 12:54
As sad as that is I can remember worrying about Bethany going to see Ethan and maybe passing something on. Feel real sorry that it has happened, poor baby. Please don't let Ethan die! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 12 May 2007 19:47
Okay, Mal and Freya need a break. If Freya loses another child she won't survive it and neither will Mal, something tells me they will literally self-destruct.

And I certainly hope that Bethany didn't catch it - whatever it is. Ugh, this could just go so many different and bad ways ... post quickly so my imagination can stop working in overdrive!
Saturday, 12 May 2007 22:06
Call me extremely morbid...but I hope to Hell I am right and what Ethan has is not a common contagion but something engineered to attack a specific target. Cuz if Ethan is lost and Bethany gets sick too...the crew will crumble:(

Utterly brilliant work with the tension-building and scene alternation, Jane0904. River and Jayne's scene definitely created a spectacular counter-point to Bethany's revelation about Ethan's health!

BEB
Sunday, 13 May 2007 13:58
Wonderful use of the back and forth action between characters to build tension.

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