Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Paquin - Part VI

Thursday, May 10, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Simon's attending to Mal, but is he in time? There's an epilogue coming up, but please, please ... comment?

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Despite the blankets, by the time they’d rounded the last outcrop and could see the shuttle sitting a short distance away, just visible through the snow being blown into their faces, Mal’s body temperature was getting dangerously low.

“Soon be home,” Simon said, checking the saline bags.

“Sure,” Mal whispered. “But then it’ll be time to get up and feed the horses.”

“What’d he say?” Jayne asked, craning his neck around.

“He’s delirious.”

“No, I ain't,” Mal said. “Least, not that I know of.”

“You just mentioned horses. We don’t have any.”

But Mal had slipped back into semi-consciousness.

“Hurry,” Simon said.

Freya had the door open, and as Jayne pulled the hover to a stop she was out in a moment, ignoring the snow clogging her hair, her clothes, just clambering aboard. “Mal?” she said, looking at his almost blue face.

“We need to get him inside.”

She nodded and helped them lift her husband down from the vehicle.

Then Jayne’s foot slipped on a crust of ice, and he’d have fallen, taking Mal with him, except River was suddenly there, her arms around him, stopping him.

“Thanks, moonbrain,” he said softly, and she smiled at him.

Zoe had the heater going full blast inside, and the air felt hot and dry as they manhandled Serenity’s captain through the small doorway. Something jarred, and he cried out, Freya instantly at his side, holding his hand, but he hadn’t really woken.

They laid him flat on the bench, and Simon checked his pulse yet again. It was thready, weakening. “He needs blood,” he muttered. “That saline just isn’t enough.” He glanced at the others. “I don’t have the equipment to filter it, so it has to be the same group.”

Jayne sighed and shrugged out of his coat. “Go on then,” he said, holding out his arm. “Might as well get his money’s worth.”

River beamed proudly at him.

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Hank couldn’t sit still. He was pacing the bridge like a caged animal, wanting … no, needing to know what the tyen shiao duh was happening.

“Heard anything?

Comments
Thursday, 10 May 2007 11:08
Nice piece of writing here! You kept up the angst and the funnies and the action. What more can you ask for?
Thursday, 10 May 2007 12:23
Loved Mal's line, "Can't help thinkin', as Captain, I should be getting that." Can just hear Nathan Fillion delivering that line perfectly! Great work, yet again!
Thursday, 10 May 2007 14:11
Oh, my favorite line was Simon - "I save that for River." meaning the really good drugs. That was great! Perfectly snarky and well-placed given the situation.

I'm glad to see Freya and Zoe dealing with Crandall and getting everything handled just right. I'm thinkin' Mal should let his crew mutiny a bit more often.

And when are you going to give us some real Jayne/River goodness? Enough with the tease ...
Thursday, 10 May 2007 19:07
Utterly fabulous work here, Jane0904! The tension was well-crafted and the humour was top-notch;D

BEB
Friday, 11 May 2007 09:37
Loved this and very happy that Freya used her 'ability' to suggest to Crandall that he wouldn't be bearing them in mind for any further jobs. With folk like him, who needs enemies? Man gave the creeps from the start. So glad that Mal is going to be okay and I loved it being Jayne giving him blood and Mal's reaction when he found out. Oh Jayne is going to be rubbing that in isn't he? Also loved it being the women who sorted out Crandall and prevented any unpleasantness. Ali D :~)
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