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Paquin - Part II

Sunday, May 6, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The job continues, while Bethany plays. Mostly fluff, but there's more to come. Please, please leave feedback. My muse needs it. (And so do I!)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3256    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Crandall was a tall man, almost as big and broad as Jayne. He looked liked he’d been through just as many bar fights, too, judging from the somewhat broken nature of his nose. Which made his choice of clothes all the more surprising. He was dressed in slacks and a sweater that wouldn’t have looked out of place on the young doctor. His age, though, Mal would put at near his own, and the idle thought occurred to him that he’d probably fought in the war.

“Captain Reynolds.” Crandall smiled.

“That’s me.” Mal walked down the ramp, leaving Zoe and Jayne standing at the top. He didn’t hold out his hand. “Got your goods right here.” He looked past Crandall towards the two men waiting by the small hover. “Only it looks to me like you’re gonna have to come back for ‘em. They won’t fit into that little thing.”

Crandall’s smile didn’t waver. “Well, that’s what I’d like to talk to you about. Can we go inside?”

Mal didn’t move. “It’s a nice day.”

Crandall shrugged. “As you say.” He gestured over his shoulder to his hover. “This is my personal vehicle.”

“Nice.” Mal didn’t mind making small talk, as long as it didn’t go on too long. “So you’re getting something bigger to come?”

“There is a slight problem with that. These goods are destined for my storage facility in the mountains.” He glanced towards the smudge of dark blue on the horizon. “And there would normally be no problem with my men taking it there, except our mule is out of action at the moment.”

“Fixable?”

“We’re waiting for a part. So I was wondering if you could be presumed upon to deliver the goods direct.”

Mal nodded slowly. “Might be able to. If we land my boat close by –“

“Sorry,” Crandall interrupted. “My facility … well, it sits into the mountain itself. There’s nowhere to land a ship within a fair distance.”

“Shuttle?”

Crandall shook his head. “Don’t you have a ground vehicle that could make it?”

Mal glanced over his shoulder at the hover mule hanging in Serenity’s cargo hold. “We do, but …”

Comments
Sunday, 06 May 2007 12:38
Nice little fluffy bit, but you've got several fronts where I can see angst abrewing.. Hmm, which one is it going to be? Love your writing as always!
Sunday, 06 May 2007 12:46
I'm not feeling good about Crandell. Somethings got to happen. Things never go smooth for the crew. especially when Mal and Jayne are together.

I also love Bethany playing pirate with Hank and River.
Sunday, 06 May 2007 19:43
The pirate scene with Hank and Bethany was precious and was Zoe coming and being roped into playing. Of course, I also love River literally swinging in to save the day.

I'm a mite worried about little Ethan and about Mal and Jayne going off alone. I think maybe they should have negotiated a bit more to wait until Serenity could fly. Plus, now if they get in trouble, who's going to rescue them.

And just a detail, but I'm curious - is Zoe showing yet? She should be, right? This is great stuff ... can't wait for the angst though.
MERRYWYN
Monday, 07 May 2007 04:56
I love your work! Please please keep going! I check everyday to see if you've posted anything new.
Tuesday, 08 May 2007 01:47
All kinds of brilliant stuff here, Jane0904! Definitely lurved the Hank-Bethany-River playfighting scene;)

Gotta say though...I have me some serious concerns about this whole job situation. Mal and Jayne alone? Running cargo with the mule alone on a trip that will take a couple of days round-trip? Something smells off in the 'Verse:(

BEB
Wednesday, 09 May 2007 22:33
Why do I get the sinking feeling that Mal and the crew are being set up? All those excuses for why Crandall can't pick up his goods makes me nervous. I don't like it one little bit. Also, I keep expecting Niska to materialise out of the ether which is silly, right, because you would be more original than that. Really wish Mal had just dumped Crandall's cargo at his feet and left the humping of it to his mountain fortress to the man himself. Ho hum, Ali D :~)
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