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Paquin

Friday, May 4, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Just a little fluff for Friday. Mal and Hank have a fatherly talk - about being fathers. Please comment. Pretty please.

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Serenity landed on Paquin just around dusk, notifying their contact that they had arrived.

“Sorry, Mal, but you’re gonna have to wait ‘til tomorrow. You made better time than we thought, and Crandall ain't here yet. Should arrive early a.m.”

Mal shrugged. “No problem.” He looked into the screen. “Anything happening around here we need to know about?”

Halvorsen shook his head. “Nope. Been dead quiet for a while.”

“Shiny. Well, let me know when he’s due, and I’ll roll out the welcome mat.”

“You being facetious?” Halvorsen asked, looking at Mal from under his big, bushy blonde eyebrows.

“Me? Would I do such a thing?”

“Yeah.”

Mal laughed. “I just don’t exude that allure of mystery any longer, do I?”

“Can’t honestly say you ever did. And tell Freya next time she’s in town to come see us. Hannah and the kids wanna say hi. And we still ain't seen that little’un of yours.”

“You know, we could always drop by now. Bring the shuttle.”

Halvorsen’s face broke into a full grin. “Now, that is a thought. When d’you think you could get here?”

Mal glanced at the shipboard chronometer. “An hour?”

“Shiny. Hannah’ll get some food going.”

“Food? As in the real thing?”

“Sure is.”

“You might get the rest of the crew descending on you if you say that too loudly.”

“Don’t mind if we do, but maybe another time, okay?”

Mal smiled. Since the war Halvorsen had always shied away from big groups, and his wife hadn’t managed to change the pattern. “Okay. Be setting down on your porch in a little while.”

“See you then.”

Halvorsen signed off and Mal sat back.

“We going somewhere?” Freya asked from the doorway to the bridge.

“Visiting.”

She walked up behind him and leaned down, putting her arms around his shoulders. “It’ll be good to see Hannah. We’ve not managed to catch up since Mabel was born.”

“Well, they want to see Ethan too, so get him together and meet me in the shuttle.” He stood up, taking her into his embrace. “Told you it’d just be you and

Comments
Friday, 04 May 2007 16:49
I really like this Jane. It was good interaction between Mal and Hank. Loved the way they denied they were talking about anything in particular as well.
Friday, 04 May 2007 20:20
Lovely, as always. But why do I feel a terrible foreboding in spite of everything here? Oh, that's right. Maybe because I've been reading all your other stories, and things never cna go smooth!
Saturday, 05 May 2007 02:10
I like seeing Mal as the elder statesman, imparting knowledge to Hank on fatherhood and kinda life in general. It makes sense that he would has he survived quite a bit.

Although I worry a bit about Hank and Zoe only because he should probably be a bit more open with what he's feeling, but I can understand why he's not.
Saturday, 05 May 2007 12:37
You really nailed the Zoe snarkiness in this one, Jane0904. The banter with her and Mal was spunky and funny and still held the respect and trust between them. Very nice !
Monday, 07 May 2007 19:32
Some fabulous stuff here, Jane0904. Really got caught up in the moment when Mal was dispensing wisdom to Hank about the nature of being a father;)

BEB
Wednesday, 09 May 2007 21:00
Absolutely brilliant! My favourite bit was the talk between Mal and Hank, made me want to hug them both. Sigh. Just love your writing to bits, Ali D :~)
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