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Eden - Epilogue

Thursday, May 3, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Everyone has a chance to relax, only ... and you know I just can't leave these things by now! Please, please feedback. There's some fluff to come, some angst ... oh, lots more stories to tell!

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They’d eaten, the tension of the last couple of days all but gone. Everyone was around the table, even Hank, who had insisted on leaving the infirmary. So far most of the talk was about the upcoming baby.

“A boy,” Kaylee repeated for the fiftieth time. “Can’t believe you two are gonna have a son.” She grinned. “Does Inara know?”

“That it’s a boy?” Hank shook his head. “Not yet. Thought we might save that for when we visit.”

“And when’s that gonna be, Cap’n?” The young mechanic turned to Mal.

Mal's jaw dropped. “You just left her a few days since!”

“And look what’s happened in the meantime.” Kaylee pouted. “Got a lot to say.”

“Well, it ain't gonna be for a week or so. Gotta deliver the goods to Paquin, then we’ve got another job lined up on Greenleaf. Can’t say no to work, Kaylee.”

“Not suggesting that,” Kaylee asserted. “But I'm sure there’s some stuff she needs. Be like having a job.”

Mal knew he wasn't going to win. Not with the looks Kaylee and Hank were giving him. Even Jayne looked anxious to get back to Lazarus. He gave in. “Talk to her. See what she might want. Maybe we can swing by after Greenleaf.”

Kaylee grinned. “ Xie xie , Cap’n.”

“Are we going to see Auntie ‘Nara?” Bethany asked indistinctly, sucking her spoon.

“Soon, sweetheart,” Simon said, taking the spoon from her and putting it on the table.

Jayne leaned forward. “Hey, I know a trick you can do with –“

“No.”

“We’ll be going there in a while,” Kaylee added, smoothing her daughter’s hair from her face.

“She got horses?”

“I don’t know. We can ask.”

Bethany grinned. “I like horses. Uncle Jayne lets me ride.”

Uncle Jayne gave her a look to shut her up, but she just smiled sweetly at him.

“Horses or not, we can tell her in person,” Hank said, nodding at Zoe. “Let her know about my son.” He sounded so proud.

“At long as he’s healthy,” Zoe said.

“He is,” Simon agreed. “The stun doesn’t seem to have affected either of you. Although I’d be curious to know h

Comments
Thursday, 03 May 2007 11:40
I enjoyed the glimpse behind the tough decision to end a life - no matter who - and to know that every decision though seemingly right, always has a price.
Friday, 04 May 2007 03:26
Really terrific "resolution" to this story arc. Poor Mal, the crew just won't let him stay away from Inara ... but I too liked Freya's struggle to come to terms with what she did.

And of course, I love Bethie. The idea of her and Hank playing pirates with Jayne is priceless. And for some reason every time I picture Simon as a daddy it makes me all mushy inside. *sigh* ... so, what's next?
Monday, 07 May 2007 07:10
It's never easy, it it? And it's not gonna be easy for Freya for a long while, I think...even with the crew's support. Niska was a cancer that needed eradicating, since he had been given ample opportunity to let bygones be bygones since the time of "The Train Job."

And I too share Simon's concern about creating more of the Pax antidote. If the genetic marker for Reaver creation with exposure to the Pax is linked to psychic ability...River, Freya and Bethany are in serious trouble. Kaylee and Simon less so, though I would think Kaylee's innate ability with machinery represents a stronger passive psychic ability than Simon's skills.

BEB
Wednesday, 09 May 2007 20:44
Loved this epilogue though feel really sad at Freya's distress at the end. I liked Mal going to Simon to get the antidote analysed, that kind of forward thinking is excellent but also makes me worry about what else you have planned for the next round of stories. As for Inara, I don't know why you have the crew running back and forth to her. She left and has her own life to lead now. What's wrong with Kaylee sending her a wave and yacking to her for hours on end if that's what she wants? Can't wait for Zoe's baby to be born and I really loved Hank calling her cupcake and then wondering where the word had come from. Way to go, you write such shiny stories! Ali D :~)
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