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Eden - Part VII

Tuesday, May 1, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The menfolk are forced to wait while River attempts rescue ... a shortish chapter. I know I beg for feedback, like a man in the desert for water, but ... please?

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“Do you know what this is, Mr Mills?” Niska asked, holding up a small vial.

“Perfume?” Hank managed to croak, his throat raw.

“Very amusing. You must continue. We must see how far you can keep being amusing, Mr Mills.” Niska nodded encouragingly. “I had high hopes of Captain Reynolds – do you think you could match him?”

Hank shuddered.

“So tell us,” Freya said, seeing the tremor going through the pilot’s body, glad to get Niska away from him.

“You have perhaps heard of Miranda.”

“Heard of it?” Hank let his head drop back against the metal frame. “Oh, just a bit.”

“Then you will understand what Reavers are. How they were created.”

Zoe looked at the vial and realisation struck like an axe into her spine. “ Run-tse duh fuo-tsoo ,” she breathed.

“Yes, yes,” Niska said, turning to her, delight on his old man‘s face. “Captain Reynolds chooses his crew carefully. You have intelligence.” He turned the vial to catch the light, the green fragments glittering like shards of emeralds. “G-32 Paxilon Hydrochlorate, to be precise.”

Freya stood straighter. “What the hell are you doing with that gos se ?”

“Mr Donaldson and his principles, they needed someone who understands about pain. Inflicting. Causing. Finding the person beneath the skin. Me.”

“That’s a plus?” Hank shook his head. “You’re crazier than I’d heard.”

Niska just smiled benevolently at him. “Have you heard of the writings of Shan Yu?” he asked. “I would like to teach you.”

Zoe stiffened. “So this Pax,” she said, trying to draw his attention back. “Why? What would the Alliance want with more of this stuff?”

“Alliance?” Niska laughed. “Not quite. At least not what you might consider Alliance.”

Donaldson stepped forward uncomfortably. “Look, I really don’t think this is the kind of thing you should be discussing.”

“Why not?” Niska asked. “They are dead people.”

His words, said so normally, chilled them all.

“Well, dead or not, it’s not the sort of thing you should go t

Comments
Tuesday, 01 May 2007 17:23
Oh Niska redefines the term tamade hun dan ... this is incredibly creepy and terrifying, which is a great credit to you, Jane 0904.

I'm just really, really hoping that Hank is okay and that River gets there mashang ... I have a very bad feeling about all of this!
Tuesday, 01 May 2007 18:57
Gulp!
Tuesday, 01 May 2007 19:59
Please, would SOMEBODY kill this guy already. (shudders) Cree-py!

Great writing, though! More, please.
Tuesday, 01 May 2007 21:04
BSCPantherfan - I killed him in my last fic. Does that help?

He is a SOB, ain't he?
Tuesday, 01 May 2007 22:21
You are fiendish aren't you? If this was a book I'd be so tempted to look ahead and make sure everyone is OK. But no, you keep me coming back day in and day out and begging for more.

Now, let me join the chorus. Please, SOMEBODY (preferably River or Mal) kill Niska sooner rather than later.
Sunday, 06 May 2007 22:40
Oh...the sheer levebu of dramatic tension, and creepiness put forth here is astounding! I honestly want to ask you if you have Joss trussed up in your basement, Jane0904!

;D

Call me morbid...but I am on pins and needles to see how the Pax will affect Hank, though I get the feeling he will be one who has the necessary genetic markers to become a Reaver. If Hank had issues after shooting someone in a previous story...he's gonna have all kinds of issues when he becomes extremely agressive and violent in the future:(

BEB
Sunday, 06 May 2007 22:41
Oh...the sheer level of dramatic tension, and creepiness put forth here is astounding! I honestly want to ask you if you have Joss trussed up in your basement, Jane0904!

;D

Call me morbid...but I am on pins and needles to see how the Pax will affect Hank, though I get the feeling he will be one who has the necessary genetic markers to become a Reaver. If Hank had issues after shooting someone in a previous story...he's gonna have all kinds of issues when he becomes extremely agressive and violent in the future:(

BEB
Sunday, 06 May 2007 22:41
Ignore my first posting...spelling errors:(
Wednesday, 09 May 2007 20:11
I am hoping the Pax gives Hank the strength and aggression to rip Niska's head off his shoulders and shove it down that twisted sumbitch's neck until it comes out of his toes. By then hopefully River et al will have arrived and can give him the antidote before he creams the lot of them. But what do I know? I am too busy praying and biting my gorram nails with worry. Ali D
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