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Eden - Part V

Sunday, April 29, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Hank is in the clutches of an old enemy, while Mal and the rest of the crew think they know where he is ...
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He’d heard about Mal and the late Wash’s run-in with Niska. How he’d tortured them, then, when Zoe had bought her husband back, how he’d really gone to work on Mal. But it had always been a distant thing, a story, even when one day he’d noticed the scar still visible in places around Mal’s ear. It was only a story .

He wished it still was.

What was it about screaming? All the books he’d read had made it clear a man doesn’t scream, he bites it back, holds it inside, no matter what the bad guy does to him. How totally and utterly ridiculous that seemed now.

His scream echoed back to him as the electricity coursed through his body again. As it stopped, he slumped in the restraints.

How had they done this? How had Mal and Wash survived? They had to have been so much stronger than this, so much more of a man than he was.

He hovered on the verge of unconsciousness.

No matter what he said, what he did, he was a coward, and this just proved it. Barely damaged him, and already he couldn’t take it.

“Course you can.” A voice at the edge of his hearing. “And it ain’t about being a coward.”

Hank struggled to open his eyes, but he couldn’t see anyone. Niska was talking quietly to his man, apparently discussing what tool to try out on him next. They were taking no notice of the new person in the room. “Who …” He tried to speak but his throat wouldn’t work properly.

“This is torture, not a tea party.” A man came round into his vision.

Hank blinked hard, trying to clear the sweat and blood from the cut that kept re-opening above his eye. The newcomer was blond, an odd unfinished look to his face, and wearing a Hawaiian shirt that should have been illegal. “Not a …” Suddenly he knew who it was, and realised that he must have gone insane.

Wash patted him on the shoulder, and he didn‘t even feel it.

“You take it. Can’t do nothing less. And you don’t die, or Zoe’ll never forgive you.” Mal’s old pilot looked him up and down, then shrugged.

“Forgive … me?” Hank ground

Comments
Sunday, 29 April 2007 13:10
Like you bringing Wash back, if only in Hank's head.

Worried for Freya and Zoe. I feel like they are walking into a trap.

Sunday, 29 April 2007 15:32
Really hate to see Hank in pain, but love the idea of Wash seeing him through it. I really hope the next blood spilled is not attached to BDH's, though.
Monday, 30 April 2007 00:01
Excellent chapter! Can't wait for the next one!
Monday, 30 April 2007 00:36
Oh most definitely walking into a trap. Although I really hope Freya doesn't get hurt again, because if she does, Mal will lock her on Serenity for the rest of her days.

I too liked Wash coming back. I'm not a huge fan of "ghost" Wash, but I think his presence here was very appropriate.
Tuesday, 01 May 2007 04:29
I too loved the presence of Ghost!Wash, but mainly for the reason that it's Hank's take on Wash (having never met the man). The line about the "unfinished" quality of Wash's features, and his kinda brusque manner strike me as definitely something Hank or another person who only knows about Wash through others' stories would dream up.

Can't wait to see how the arrival of Freya and Zoe pans out. Get the feeling it's gonna be puppies and rainbows for all:(

BEB
Wednesday, 09 May 2007 19:54
I really hated the idea of the crew splitting up. If I had been Mal I would have gone with Freya's isntinct on this one, especially as he now knows the Skyplex is yet another illegal place of Niska's. Very surprised River can't sense anything at all though, that is all manner of disturbing. And I loved Wash reappearing if only in Hank's mind to give him strength to hang on like Mal did for Wash the first time round. Ali D
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