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Eden - Part III

Friday, April 27, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Shortish part - the crew discuss Hank's dilemma, and things begin to move ... as it's Friday, there may be a 2BF. But please, comment!

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“How’d they get Hank’s DNA?” Kaylee asked. “They are talking about those two men who … the ones that …”

“I figure they are, little Kaylee,” Mal said. “Ain't been on Ibis for more’n a year before that, and it ain't like Zoe’s let my pilot that much out of her sight that he could wander that far.”

They were sitting around the table in the dining area, food uneaten in front of them.

“But Simon was the one with the messed up hands.” She looked at her husband.

“DNA can come from anything,” he said, shaking his head. “I'm surprised they don’t have mine too.”

“Maybe they do, doc,” Mal said. “But we’re not gonna put you in the position of finding out.”

“So, what?” Jayne asked. “We break in and get Hank back?”

“Are you suggesting an armed raid on a hospital?” Simon said, staring in disbelief at the big mercenary.

Jayne shrugged. “Just an idea. And it wouldn’t take more’n a couple of us to carry it out. Hell, I could do it by myself.”

“It’s a stupid suggestion.” The young doctor shook his head. “Do you have any idea of the number of security cameras they’re likely to have?”

“Oh, no, sorry, doc, I ain't never committed a crime before,” Jayne said sarcastically. “Ripped off that hospital on Ariel, didn’t we?”

“Yes, and look where that got us.”

Jayne started to get up, to show the man exactly what he thought of that comment, but River put her hand on his arm. “No,” she murmured, and he subsided.

“Is this going to be the way of things now?” Simon asked bitterly. “You’re going to side with him even when you know I’m right?”

River looked at him. “You’re both right,” she said, her voice low. “And wrong.”

“River, honey, that don’t make sense,” Kaylee said, anxious to defuse the situation, even if it was by putting herself in the line of fire.

“We could walk in and take him, but we would be seen.”

“But we can’t let the Alliance have him.”

“No.” River sighed. “Not for something he didn’t do.” She looked at her brother, then at Mal. “I think I may have t

Comments
Friday, 27 April 2007 15:32
Doesn't anyone have anything to say?
Friday, 27 April 2007 19:53
Yes, I have something to say. I'm still loving these characters and this story. Just got time enough to read it now! Looking forward to next part. I really hope they can get Hank back soon!
Friday, 27 April 2007 23:07
Awesome as always!

“This boat.” He turned his head so he could see her, the short brown hair framing her face. “Sometimes it feels like we’re a magnet for trouble.”

Her lips twitched. “You only just figured that out?”

Absolutely love those lines!

Saturday, 28 April 2007 01:05
Yes, I too am a bit surprised that Mal just figured out that they appear to be a magnet for trouble!

I really loved Kaylee coming to River's defense, but I think Simon has a point. Both about Bethie and River. He is River's blood relation and he should have been told - or at the very least, River should have been strongly urged by the crew to tell him.

Still, I'm not liking this whole "Hank's a felon" situation ... fix it, please.
Sunday, 29 April 2007 20:28
Somehow I get the feeling Mal's been aware of "Serenity" and her crew's ability to attract trouble by the shuttle-load for a while now;D

And I have to agree with Simon about him being kept in the dark about River's actions. For all anyone knew, River could have had a relapse or been triggered when she killed the two slavers...so not informing Simon about what happened could have put the crew in serious danger....

Still...all kinds of brilliant stuff here, Jane0904! Can't wait to see where part 4 takes the crew;)

BEB
Wednesday, 09 May 2007 19:35
You have got to get Hank out of there, *mashang*! No way can Niska get his hands on him. At this rate I will have no nails left by the time the story ends. Ali D
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