Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

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Monday, April 23, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Inara leaves Serenity. Follows NIGHTINGALE and before angst ... Please, please feedback. I prostrate myself before you ...

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Inara watched Serenity take off, her thrusters tilting as Hank smoothly eased her into the sky. For a moment she seemed to hang, facing the house, and then dipped forward into an obvious bow. Inara laughed and waved, convincing herself she could see Hank through the bridge window, grinning widely, Mal standing in his usual place, Zoe just behind him, in hers …

Then she was gone, hauled up into the blue become black, until she was just a pinpoint of light that disappeared in the blink of an eye.

Inara sighed. She was truly on her own now, and it scared her a little. She’s said as much to Zoe.

“You? Scared?” Zoe looked at her, as if she’d just admitted she was an alien.

“I’ve never been on my own like this before.” She picked up the cushion from the sofa and held it in front of her. “When I left home it was to go to the Training House. Out here, on this ship, all of you around me … I was still a Companion, under their protection.” She went on quickly, seeing the look on the other woman’s face, “Yes, I know, as misguided as that was. But now it’s just me. Here.” She dropped the cushion. “All on my own.”

“On your own?” Zoe smiled. “You’ve got that Mrs Boden and her husband, and at least three other people I’ve seen. Hardly counts as being on your own.”

“You know what I mean.”

Zoe nodded. “No family.”

“Yes.”

“’Nara, we’re still out there. Just ‘cause we ain’t gonna be in each other’s back pockets don’t mean we’re not family.”

“I’m just going to miss you.” There was a catch in her throat.

The first mate stepped forward and wrapped her arms around the ex-Companion. “And I’ll miss you too.”

Kaylee had been more honest. “Who’ll I talk to now?” she wailed softly.

“I thought you respected why I’m doing this,” Inara pointed out gently, watching the young mechanic sitting under Serenity’s gently turning engine.

“I do! ‘N’ I’m being selfish here, and I don’t care.” Kaylee stuck out her chin. “But who’s gonna brush my hair and tell me I’m pretty if you ain’t aro

Comments
Monday, 23 April 2007 14:32
I'm a Malnara fan so this was very sad but i guess Mal has to stay with Freya
Monday, 23 April 2007 20:33
This was great - the perfect way to "wrap this up" - I will miss Inara of course, but I think it's best for her to move on as much as she can. I'm glad she was able to counsel Jayne although I'm a little surprised that she didn't have a final talk with River. But maybe they've said all they need.

Now, bring on the angst!
Monday, 23 April 2007 22:32
A nice way to round the story off and I like that Inara was reminded that she is family and they will all be coming back to see her from time to time and send waves etc. I think a new start is just what she needs but my favourite bit was Jayne and his shy request for advice in courting River. I loved that. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 23 April 2007 23:37
Some utterly fabulous work here, Jane0904! While it saddens me to see Inara and the crew part ways like this...it's definitely for the best. Mal's got a wife and child now, and all it would take would be a moment of intoxication or weakness for a rather problematic situation to arise.

Still...some brilliant Inara/BDH moments with the rest of the crew, 'specially Jayne's conversation with Inara about courting River properly. Just hope that the final line about things not being so bad after all isn't recanted too quickly;)

BEB
Tuesday, 24 April 2007 23:58
Excellent way to send Inara off in style. Loved it!
Sunday, 18 October 2009 16:13
The world you weave in your Maya 'verse is absorbing, engrossing, and vividly scenic. I am a fan, albeit a recent recruit to your latest Fic's I am working my way up your fic ladder and Nightingale was such a 'page turner' I failed to properly comment. If I could only get you, badkarma00, and Brian to collaborate on a Allen, Maya, Shade 'verse epic.. Damn...:)

Until then... Back to the story.. Im love'n it by the way.. did you get that??

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