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Nightingale - Part V

Saturday, April 21, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal and Freya argue, Hank and Zoe talk ... One more part to go in this title, but there'll be more. Thanks to everyone who comments, and please continue. I'm down on bended knee here, you know ...

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Freya came out of the nursery to find Mal facing her. “He’s asleep,” she said, smiling.

“Good.” He didn’t smile back.

“Ah.” She closed the door and leaned on it. “We’re going to have one of those conversations.”

“Pretty much.”

“Well, if you don’t mind, I’ll be getting ready for bed while you tell me off.” She went to move past him, but he took her arm.

“I’d rather you didn’t. We need to talk. Properly. Not with you getting all naked and putting my mind onto other things.”

“Don’t you have any self-control?” she asked, teasing him.

“Just … don’t.”

She looked into his blue eyes, at the determination in them, and her forehead creased slightly. She nodded. “Okay. Can I sit down?”

“Surely.” He let go and she walked to the bed, forgetting to hold the limp back, lowering herself carefully to the mattress.

He noticed. “It still bothering you?” he asked, letting himself get side-tracked, just for a moment.

She glanced down at her hips. “I’m okay.”

“Not what I asked.”

“It’s getting better, Mal. And I’ll be fine.”

“Okay. As long as you’re sure.”

“I'm sure.”

“Good.” He took a deep breath. “So do you want to explain to me what all that was about?”

“All what?”

“Well, apart from the fact that Bethie said you knew about her … peeking –“

“Mal, that was –“

“I’m more concerned about why you don’t want River teaching her anything.”

She looked up at him, his arms crossed. “You being captain again?”

“Frey, don’t play games with me. Something’s going on, and I want to know what it is.”

She didn’t answer for a moment, just gazed up at him. Then … “Those two men on Ibis. The ones who attacked Kaylee. She killed them.”

“She did what ?”

“Killed them. It was her.”

“I …” For once Mal was stuck for words.

“I’ve spoken to her, so has Jayne. Just now. I don’t think we’ll have to worry about it again.”

Mal’s jaw dropped. “Worry about it? Frey, she killed two unconscious men. Weren’t attacking or fighting, or even tracking us. S

Comments
Saturday, 21 April 2007 12:21
Excellent dialog as always and a neat peak inside of their relationships to see how they work.
Saturday, 21 April 2007 12:41
Loved the relationship stuff too.

“Just … if I worry about Bethany like this, what am I gonna be like with ours?”

She smiled. “It’s probably gonna be hell, Hank. He’s gonna be locked up in his room for sixteen years just so’s we don’t have to be concerned he’s gonna fall into the compression coil.”

He grinned. “Only sixteen. Simon said Bethie ain’t gonna have to worry about sex for forty years.”

You got that so right. I think every parent feels that way when the relity of a baby is coming hits them.
Saturday, 21 April 2007 15:52
great addition here. love how hank's so like a little boy in his eagerness, and, of course, his protection of his family. i think he was a little unreasonable toward river... but love makes us do crazy things. and this chapter really cleared up my question about how bethie inherited river's psychic abilities. it makes a lot of sense in your verse, especially with kaylee. the series leaves so much to the imagination that it may well be the case there, too. and thanks BEB for explaining it as well. :-)
Saturday, 21 April 2007 15:52
whoops, i meant to say mal's protection of his family, and mal being unreasonable toward river.
Saturday, 21 April 2007 18:27
Loved this especially the Mal/Freya goodness but also the wonderful Hank/Zoe moments too. Ali D :~)
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Saturday, 21 April 2007 21:41
This is terrific - so wonderfully in character for everyone. I'm glad that the crew is determined to keep Bethie save - I wouldn't expect any less!
Sunday, 22 April 2007 16:56
Another lovely chapter.
Sunday, 22 April 2007 22:32
I really didn't "explain" anything," killwithbrain. I offered a plausible suggestion for how Bethany could have psychic abilities and Jane0904 seemingly took up the suggestion...or proved my suggestion right;)

And Jane0904! How fabulous are you?!? Utterly! Over the moon and to Mars from your usage of the idea that I suggested...even if it was only a mere confirmation, rather than a borrowing.!

Really thought Mal was spot-on with his argument with Freya. I could totally see Mal being "WTF!?" when it comes to having secrets like Bethie's abilities and River's little moment of vengeance coming to light. Though I get the feeling that Mal will still have a conversation with River about this, even though both Freya and Jayne have talked to her about it...

BEB

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