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Nightingale - Part IV

Friday, April 20, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Jayne and River discuss matters ... Please respond so I know you've read it.

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“What’re you doing?” Jayne asked, watching as River moved the earth around with her bare hands by the light of the storm lantern at her side. She already cleared a lot of the grass, and now was breaking up the clumps of soil, pushing it through her fingers.

“Making a garden.”

“In the dark. In the middle of the night.” He glanced up into the sky, all black velvet and sparkling diamonds.

“Sneak up on the weeds while they’re asleep.” She pushed a lock of hair back away from her face, leaving a streak of dirt across her cheek.

“Here,” he said. “Let me.” He stood behind her and gathered her hair up, carefully fastening it back in the clip he’d given her.

“Thank you,” she said, smiling up at him. “Were you looking for me?”

“Just checking you were okay.” He looked towards the house, quiet but for the glow from the lamps outside the front doors. “Thought you mighta taken it into your head to sleep there.”

“Not yet.”

“Right.” He paused. “So why’re you making a garden?”

“In memory of Jethro. Somewhere he never was.”

“Come again?”

She held up two handfuls of rich soil, the scent reaching his nostrils. “I’m going to make a garden on Serenity, but that’s for everyone. If I did it for Jethro there, I’d be remembering him all the time. Here, though, it can be outside, in the air, growing up towards the sky.”

He sat down carefully next to her, hardly wincing, just resting his elbow on a bent knee. “You okay?” he asked gently.

She nodded. “Shiny,” she said, smiling at him. “Just … did I sound bad?”

He shrugged. “Bit like the old River.” He added quickly, “But I understood ya.”

“I'm glad.” She went back to the earth. “Flowers here. Sweet rosemary for remembrance, thyme, maybe some tarragon too.”

“Be pretty fine, if it all grows.”

“It will. As long as Inara remembers to water it.”

Jayne laughed. “Don’t think she’ll be working out here.”

“Then I’ll remind her.” She twinkled at him and carried on sifting.

He sat with her for a while, watching he

Comments
Friday, 20 April 2007 13:02
I'm not needy ... yes I am.

Isn't this working?
Friday, 20 April 2007 19:17
Yay for River and Jayne! I really liked this interaction as it showed that they are both coming to an understanding. I'm glad River can identify that it wasn't right to hurt those men, but that she won't apologize for it. They were bad men.

I think it's great!
Friday, 20 April 2007 21:04
I like River's logic in not having the garden for Jethro actually on Serenity, that made a lot of sense. While I enjoyed her interaction with Jayne, his dialogue often didn't quiet sound like Jayne. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 20 April 2007 23:55
"Well, are you cured?" "No." "Then it still applies, don't ya think?" Gotta love that line! Keep up the good work!
Sunday, 22 April 2007 04:42
Ah...now things become clearer. I can definitely see Freya being concerned about River's suitability to instruct Bethany about her abilities, because as much as I respect River...I think some of the Academy's teachings have stuck around inside her head about the "greater good" being worth doing some nasty go se about. Just hope Jayne can help River heal that part of her...

And I think Jayne was generally in-character, AMDOBELL. The OOC perception, I think, might come from the fact that Jane0904 is really treading into new territory with a Jayne struggling with his own past and personality while trying to build something with River. We have seen Jayne do a lot of crap - and be something resembling sympathetic too - but out and out vulnerable and compassionate? It's a difficult line to walk, I think.

BEB

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