Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Nightingale - Part II

Wednesday, April 18, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Back on Lazarus the crew all pitch in, and various conversations are had, including Freya and Inara, while Mal gets to grips with a future potential problem ... Please feedback, as I do listen, and it makes everything worthwhile.

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Lazarus hadn’t changed in the few weeks since they’d been by. The grass was maybe a little yellower, and the heat a little stronger, but the apples were still hanging from the trees, and the water in the lake looked cool and inviting. But as the crew headed towards the house, they were more than a little surprised.

“I can’t believe how much they’ve done,” Inara said, looking up at the scaffolding and the new roof.

“Can’t say I think any of this is legal,” Mal commented. “Prob’ly came off an Alliance site, knowing Monty.”

“Are you suggesting I'm going to have Federal officers coming around demanding their goods back?” Her eyes twinkled.

“Just keep a shotgun handy inside the front door.” He grinned at her, all the awkwardness gone. Their conversation, the one with the kiss, seemed to have cleared the air amazingly between them. “Nah, shouldn’t think so. It’s probably been through so many hands even Monty ain't sure where it’s from.”

“It looks very fine, though.” Inara shook her head. “If the rest of the house is as good, I’ll be able to move in straight away.”

“Thought that was the plan anyways.”

“It is. But if they hadn’t … well, I was going to ask if I could borrow my shuttle for a few more weeks.”

“Woman, you take the cake, you do. You decide to run off on your lonesome to play at being lady of the manor, and still expect me to loan you my shuttle. My shuttle, I’ll have you note.”

She didn’t get angry. He wasn't being truly obnoxious, just pretending. “I won’t be on my lonesome. I've got a housekeeper and her husband moving in tomorrow. And I can pay for the use of the shuttle.”

“I could have someone lined up to take it,” Mal pointed out, no heat in his words.

“Oh? Would this be the same surveyor and his wife who you dangled in front of me when I first took you on?”

“Took me on?”

“You were hard work, Mal.”

“You gypped me out of a quarter of the rental.”

She smiled. “So I did.”

Kaylee strolled up behind them. “You’re not supposed to

Comments
Wednesday, 18 April 2007 10:39
Loved Mal with Bethany, made me smile a whole lot. I am glad that Freya made a point of telling Inara not to try it on with Mal again. Have the feeling she needs that impressing on her because whatever Inara feels or wants it isn't always about her. There are other people to consider, people who have already made their choices. Buying the house and doing it up so she has her own base and a new start is a good beginning for her. And Simon, still not over the fact that River wants to be with Jayne. Hope he starts to accept the idea as her choice rather than some horrific accident of fate. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 18 April 2007 14:09
I agree with Amdobell about the Mal/Bethie talk. Gotta love Mal with a little girl. Enjoyed this little slice of life.
Wednesday, 18 April 2007 14:49
Considering the fact that Simon must see his sister with Jayne everyday, I think he's handling it the best he can.

I absolutely LOVED Mal with Bethany - I too hope he and Freya have a girl. He needs someone to spoil rotten. I'm a bit worried though that everyone else but Simon and Kaylee are going to find out their daugther's a reader ... that does not bode well.
Wednesday, 18 April 2007 15:26
Love this story, and the verse you've created here. Everything works really well, and Bethie's turning into an interesting little character; I can't wait to see how things go as she grows up. One question, though. I've read quite a few fics where Simon's offspring develop their aunt's abilities as a reader. However, I always thought that River's abilities were forced onto her by the Alliance. If this is so (as it seems like with her, and Freya), then how can Bethany develop this naturally? Not only is it not a natural family trait, it's one that Simon doesn't have. Where is she getting it from? She hasn't been cut into by the Hands of Blue. Anyway, great story! Really like this installment, with the whole "family" helping Nara move.
Friday, 20 April 2007 01:39
Great googily moogily was that some awesome work here, Jane0904!

I was especially awed by the Inara-Freya conversation...mainly because it just turned on a dime from polite and friendly to Freya's "I will kill you without hesitation" threat to friendly again:O

And I gotta give you all kinds of props for the Mal/Bethany scene at the end. The initial suspense from Mal following Bethany into the house and into "her" room seems to bleed off with the brilliantly adorable banter Mal has with the youngest Tam...until Mal finds out he's got another Reader on-board his ship and one without any kind of training. It was Mal's response to this discovery and his final comment about Bethany's father being anything but thrilled with such a revelation that made me smile like I was off my rocker;)

BEB

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