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Nightingale - Part I

Tuesday, April 17, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. River and Jayne, with a little help from Bethany. Oh, and Mal makes a guest appearance. Just the start of something here, so keep with it! Oh, and please feedback ... I love to hear what you think! (TamSibling, your wish ...)

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Jayne sank down gratefully into the easy chair, favouring the healing wound in his chest. It was his first day being allowed out of his bunk without being under scrutiny, and he was feeling as weak as a kitten. He’d been shot before, more’n likely would be again, but it never got any better. Pretty soon, he surmised, he’d have so much scar tissue bullets’d just bounce right off him. He laughed to himself, then grimaced. Couldn’t be too soon, as far as he was concerned.

“Uncle Jayne?” Bethany was sitting on the stairs, just able to look down at him.

“Hey there, short stub.” He grinned at her. “You gonna come and keep me company?”

“Don’t want to hurt you.” Her brown eyes were serious.

“Can’t hurt me, Beth. I’m indestructible.” She gave him a version of River’s boob look, and he grinned wider. “Okay. Just go easy.”

She smiled brilliantly and scampered down the stairs so fast he was afraid she would fall, and he wasn’t going to be able to catch her, but she was surprisingly sure-footed for a two year old, and in a moment she was standing looking up into his face.

“Hello, Uncle Jayne,” she said formally.

“Hi, squirt.” He lifted his arm and she climbed carefully into his lap, somehow managing to avoid the area of his wound.

She looked at him, her eyes ranging across his face. “Are you dying?” she asked, her voice solemn.

“What? Who told you that?”

“No-one.”

“Ain’t gonna die, Bethie.”

“Jethro did.”

Jayne was surprised. “Yep,” he said slowly. “That he did.”

“Did you make him dead?”

There was a tug of something in his gut, and it wasn’t Simon’s handiwork. “If’n you mean, did I shoot him, no.”

“Then why are you hurting?” Bethany wanted to know.

“I was the one got shot, girl!” he protested.

“Don’t mean there.” She laid her little hand, very gently, on the wound. “Mean there.” She touched above his heart.

He stared at her. “Who’s been talking to you, Beth?”

“No-one,” she admitted. “I’m a baby. No-one talks to babies.”

“Then you’

Comments
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 09:12
Aw, sweet, Jayne is going to court River! And Simon the boob is going to have to grow up and realise he cannot run River's life for her. He should be grateful that at least it will be happening on Serenity so he will be close if anything goes wrong. I just hope that with the upcoming Jayne and River goodness you don't forget to put in some Mal and Freya moments too. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 15:28
Thank god its finally happening, great story so far.
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 16:01
x2 on that Thank God. Well written and true to character. And sweet :)
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 17:20
Aww, I'm honored *blushes*. So very, very true to character for all of them. And Bethie's a reader huh? Well, if that don't beat all! I really loved this though - for so many reasons, there are too many to count. Mostly because of Jayne's interaction with Bethany and River's insistence that he court her. It's about time she was meant to feel special and like a woman, not just a killer. So wonderful!

*sigh* I can't wait for the next part!
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 18:21
How do you keep churning this brilliance out day after day? This is beautiful, powerful stuff!
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 19:34
Sounds like it's time for Jayne to get courtin' lessons from Inara, if he can make his case to her where she'll believe him. Great writing as always.

One question: with three readers on board, when will we see an appearance by Joss' big bad Blue Sun Corp.? They must be taking notice by now, or am I trying to read too far ahead in the story?
Wednesday, 18 April 2007 22:12
It's funny...I actually had a "Pwah?" moment when I read BSCPantherfan's comments about there being three Readers on-board Serenity. Mainly because Freya's powers have been basically gone or weak for the longest time, so I had generally forgotten she was on par or better than River for freaky mind powers;)

Still...this was an utterly fabulous and adorable chapter, Jane0904! Between Jayne's utterly brilliant conversation with Bethany and the final dialogue between Mal and Jayne over the latter's need for permission to court River, I was struggling not to squee...loudly. Can't wait to see how Simon takes the news;D

BEB

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