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Sweet Sorrow - Part X

Monday, April 16, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal sees sense ... The concluding part, but there are going to be repercussions! Let me know what you think, please?

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Inara made the announcement that she was buying Monty’s place on Lazarus just after dinner. For a long moment there was silence, then Hank spoke.

“Ain’t surprised,” he said. “It’s a nice place.”

“Sure is,” Kaylee added. “Pretty.”

“You’re buying it,” Simon said, his voice flat.

“I can afford it. I think it would be good for me.”

Kaylee looked around the table. “I think it sounds shiny.”

“And of course you can all come and stay, whenever Serenity is in the area.”

“Yeah, well, not sure when we’ll be back,” Mal said shortly.

“It’s not too far out of the way from anywhere,” Hank pointed out.

“Depends on work.”

The others exchanged glances, but only Inara spoke. “It’s something I decided a little while ago, but having seen the house, I think it’s going to be ideal.”

Zoe nodded. “I can understand that.”

There was a short silence until Freya spoke. “Well, I’m going to check on Ethan,” she said, kissing Mal on the mouth before standing up and running her hand through his hair, knowing Inara was observing every move.

He grabbed it and pressed his lips to her palm. “I’ll be along in a few minutes.” He watched her leave.

“And I think I need my beauty sleep,” Hank said, climbing to his feet, then groaning as the aches and pains from the earlier fight made themselves very obviously known.

I think you need a massage,” Zoe said, following him.

“Ooh, with that citrusy oil?”

“If you play your cards right.”

“I’m really good at that. Playing cards. Strip anything, now that’s really my forte.”

“Last time was just luck …”

Their voices vanished as they went down into their bunk.

“I think you should make it an early night too,” Simon said, lifting Bethany out of her chair. “I’ll look in on Jayne and River for a while, make sure they ate the food I took down, but I’ll try not to be too long.”

Kaylee smiled, then winced as the cut in her lip pulled. “That’s okay,” she said. “I understand. I’ll have one more cup of coffee, then I’ll be down.”

“You

Comments
Monday, 16 April 2007 12:47
Kaylee has the right of it. Inara needs to do this, to move on, and Mal has to let her which he will. I want to see more Mal and Freya goodness now and hope our shrinking crew stays sharp what with those Alliance *tamade hundan* looking for them. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 16 April 2007 13:49
Great work, as always. Do you never tire of being brilliant?
Monday, 16 April 2007 19:16
I think this was a nice wrap-up to this bit, although it's obviously open ended for a variety of reasons. Something tells me Mal and Co. are going to come up against this Monster character again - and I do hope someone ends him.

I really loved Mal and Kaylee's convo - it's good to see someone else beside Freya talking sense into him. Kaylee knows Inara better than anyone on that boat, I'd wager and I think Mal would only really listen to her opinion on the subject.

And somehow, I just hope and pray that Simon and Kaylee can have another baby ... please?!?!?

Can't wait for me - and where is my Rayne?
Wednesday, 18 April 2007 06:35
Gotta say...it's all kind of surreal to see Kaylee having a long, drawn-out debate with Mal over Inara's plans. Not that I think Kaylee isn't astute and capable...it's just that it has been Zoe, Book, Inara and Freya offering these kinds of moments to Mal. Kaylee's been more of a driving force or cheerleader. Still...it shows Kaylee as having grown:D

Really hoped for a Freya/Inara moment about Inara's behaviour..but maybe it's better that Inara and her part with amicability so that Inara can get on with her life until the Monster shows up.

Oh..,and nice little moment with the cop noting there was foreign DNA on the bodies - sensible when Simon beat the ever loving shit out of the two hundans - and that the DNA source has been officially listed as dead for a while. Guess Simon is gonna find a reason to feel guilty once again, huh?

BEB

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