Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The Morning After

Sunday, April 15, 2007

This a sequel of sorts to my first Mal/Inara fic Plan A Doesn't Usually Work. I'm sorry it took me so long to post but I had a really bad case of writer's block. Many thank yous to my beta Girlaskew and Jetflair, encouraged me just to write.

After the first successful job after Miranda the crew celebrates with some of Kaylee's brew. Mal and Inara are left alone and just when Mal thought about saying something Inara passes out.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3991    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Inara cracked her right eye open just a little. As she opened both eyes the light hit her eyes and a throbbing pain shot through her head. “I must have had more to drink than I thought. I hope I didn’t embarrass myself. I’ve never lost control of myself in my entire life”. She mused.

Inara drew in a breath. “What's that smell?.” She thought. The aroma that hit her was undeniably male and was vaguely familiar to her very fuzzy brain. It was a mixture of musty wool from the blanket that covered her, perspiration, leather and a strong dose of stale alcohol.

As feeling crept up her cramped and aching body, she realized that she wasn’t in the small, utilitarian bed that had replaced her elaborate queen sized one with ruby silk sheets in her shuttle. She was sprawled in a very unladylike fashion with her legs sticking outside the blanket and she was clinging tightly to the top of someone.

She wasn't the only one in an awkward position. He was holding her in an embrace that pinned her half on him and half against the back of a sofa. Inara had been in many different positions when she awoke with a client but she had never been in this one.

She tried to remember what had happened, but the last thing she remembered last evening was taking a good sized swallow of Kaylee’s concoction and trying to put the mug on the table. After that memory there was none. I just hope it's not Jayne.

Inara tried to slowly twist out of the embrace. The more she moved the tighter his arms tried to grip her. It was soon evident that she couldn’t gracefully extricate herself with out waking him up.

Her dress was bunched up around her waist and as she moved it wrapped itself tighter around her until it was impossible to get up with out falling to the floor. This added to her consternation and an increasing sense that something was wrong. Suddenly nausea consumed her.

She stopped moving and twisting long enough for the wave of nausea to pass and then as her brain finally cleared realization hit her like a punch

Comments
Sunday, 15 April 2007 22:24
I hope it is going to be a good day. With Inara's penchant for mercurial moods you never can tell. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 18 April 2007 05:16
Hmm...gotta say that I was impressed overall with what you put down here, ncbrowncoat. It was punchy, expressive and had a clear Mal-Inara dichotomy.

However, I gotta say that - to me - things went a bit OOC after Mal made his joke about sleeping with Inara. Inara went up too easily, even for a post-BDM state of being...and Mal was too easy-going and blatantly compassionate in response. It just felt weird to see these two have an emotionally-charged conversation without a lot of the charge. Just felt kinda underwhelmed.

Still...that's just me being strange. I am sure that the feedback you get after this will be all kinds of praise-filled. And besides...Mal/Inara snark and wit is a rather challenging task to take on, I suspect...even for Joss;)

BEB
Monday, 23 April 2007 14:57
this was brillant

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