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The Right To Love - Chapter 11

Sunday, April 15, 2007

Continuation of the Simon-Centric 100 Prompt Story (Check out the link to the prompt table below to see what's coming next.) Mal and Simon have left to hunt down Niska and Kaylee is beyond distraught. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara. Angsty, angsty, angsty with just a dollop of fluff. PG-13

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A/N: All right kids, we're more than halfway there, but the angst and tension just keeps coming. I hope you like how this all (eventually) resolves.

Thanks to Leiasky for the beta and guiding light. She was integral in the plot development of this one.

Also, thanks to everyone for your shiny comments. The good and the con crit help immensely, especially as I continue writing. (If you're interested, I put up an update of my fic writing in my latest http://www.fireflyfans.net/showprofile.asp?un=TamSibling>log entry. Check it out if you want.)

Previous Chapters:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15760>Chapter 1, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15783>Chapter 2, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15892>Chapter 3, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15910>Chapter 4, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15954>Chapter 5, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16005>Chapter 6, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16062>Chapter 7, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16114>Chapter 8, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16131>Chapter 9, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16142>Chapter 10

Link to http://www.geocities.com/maegovannen/Firefly/Joss100Challenge.html>prompt table

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The Right To Love - Chapter 11 (Prompts 66-72)

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066. Empty

He was gone, that was all Kaylee could focus on. She felt better, physically, than she had for quite some time, but her mind and her heart were hurting, pounding with fear and longing … and regret.

Simon had told her he loved her and she had said – nothing. She’d murmured the words once he’d gone, but Kaylee knew he’d already been out the door and down the hall by the time she whispered them. He hadn’t heard her and now, if he did die, the last thing Simon would remember her saying was that she didn’t want

Comments
Sunday, 15 April 2007 04:20
Hi, just caught up with this series and I'm loving it.

A little dissapointed that Niska didn't get his dues, but I get the feeling it'll happen eventually.
Sunday, 15 April 2007 04:20
Hi, just caught up with this series and I'm loving it.

A little dissapointed that Niska didn't get his dues, but I get the feeling it'll happen eventually.
Sunday, 15 April 2007 04:21
Crap, how did that happen?
Sunday, 15 April 2007 04:40
That was amazing! I really liked the part about the walk in the woods. I can see Kaylee having about a hundred names on that tree from over the years. Update soon please!
Sunday, 15 April 2007 05:40
Dodged a bullet there, that thing with Niska could have ended really badly.

The reunion was so cute, and the tree was hilarious and sweet.
Sunday, 15 April 2007 10:37
This was brilliant, loved all the Simon and Kaylee goodness, and my litte shippy heart skipped a beat at Inara's reaction when Mal waved them to let them know they were coming back. Very shiny. Ali D :~)
Sunday, 15 April 2007 11:36
Haha!

A turtle.

Love this, so sad and sweet and hot and yeah... awesome!

xxx
Monday, 16 April 2007 15:40
I'm so behind in my comments!

Anyway, love how this started out angsty and ended up happy. I like to see Kaylee at fault in stories, instead of Simon. He gets the wrong end of the stick so often.
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 18:26
Gotta say...I am rather glad Mal, Zoe, River and Jayne didn't find Niska. Cuz I get the feeling that Mal was all kinds of right when he mentioned the rage at Niska to Inara. Things were starting to get all kinds of Ahab-y with Mal & co.'s desire to end the little psycho:(

Still...utterly beautiful chapter, TamSibling! Between Kaylee's conversation to Inara on the porch in the beginning to the finale with Simon and Kaylee having fun with each other...I was all kinds of awed:)

BEB

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