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Sweet Sorrow - Part VIII

Saturday, April 14, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal and Inara have a talk, and it's been long overdue ... Not finished yet, but please read and enjoy! And rate and feedback, of course ...

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Mal climbed the stairs towards the shuttles, and felt Serenity lift off. He wasn’t worried they were likely to get tabbed for the deaths of those two men - the Feds weren’t going to search too far, not with what they were going to find inside that room. There was a small frisson of anxiety for the women, but he had to believe the Alliance’d look after them. And what he’d said to Hank was right - nothing else they could do to help.

More, though, he wanted to get away in case anyone else had seen them. Rumours it might be, but what he’d read suggested this Monster was all too real, and he didn’t want to get involved. That kind of thing could just blow up in their faces.

Outside Inara’s door he paused. She left before, more than once, and if River hadn’t just been blowing smoke, she was planning to leave again. Even Freya thought so, and he’d begun to trust her returning abilities. Good thing to have in a job like theirs. Might actually stop some of the bad stuff happening.

He took a deep breath and stepped over the sill. “Anyone home?” he called.

Bethany rushed towards him. “Uncle Mal!” she called, jumping, waiting to be picked up. He swung her up onto his hip.

“Hey, there, Bethie. You keeping your Auntie Inara company?”

“We’re playing,” Bethany said, putting her arms around his neck.

“Playing what?”

“I’m a Comp … Comp …” She couldn’t quite remember the word, and bit her lip in consternation.

“Companion?” Mal asked.

She smiled at him. “Companion.”

“Is that a good idea?”

“I was showing Bethany how to make tea,” Inara said, sitting on her red satin sofa. “That’s all.”

Mal came further into the shuttle. “Long as you ain’t putting ideas into her head.”

“I’m not going to encourage anyone to go into that profession. Unless they choose to.”

“After what they did?”

“A few, Mal. Only a few.”

“You still left.”

“My choice.”

“Mmn.”

Bethany looked into his blue eyes. “Uncle Mal cross?” she asked.

He smiled at her. “Nope, not cross. Just sometime

Comments
Saturday, 14 April 2007 22:39
I'm a die hard Mal/Inara shipper but in your 'verse this is the only way Inara can keep her dignity and maybe some day find a bit of happiness. I'm sure she'll cry an ocean of tears alone in her shuttle and so will I.

It was angsty, in a good way and your characterizations of both Mal and Inara are flawless.

I am scared about what the Monster may do. Of course somehow the crew will be involved and it won't be nice.
Saturday, 14 April 2007 23:36
Excellent work once again! "What could have been" has to be one of the saddest phrases in the English language, huh?
Sunday, 15 April 2007 00:21
I think "We'll never know" is one of the saddest phrases in the English language, especially for Mal and Inara. This was great - full of amazing tension and unbelievable emotion. So many things they've left unsaid, but at the same time, they've brought it to a close.

I had a feeling Inara would settle on Lazarus - I think it'll be good for here - a safe haven of sorts. Still, heartbreaking!
Sunday, 15 April 2007 00:55
I'm glad that Mal stayed true to Freya and feel disappointed in Inara for trying to work her wiles on him at this eleventh hour, ignoring the fact that he is a happily married man, in love with his wife and a father to boot. I think Inara is making the right decision in leaving. If she can't accept the way things are then she needs to start again somewhere else. I do, however, worry that the Monster may strike once she is off on her own. It is the sort of curve ball I can imagine you throwing. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 17 April 2007 16:34
Ya know...I think you touched on two of the most painful phrases can hear when it comes to relationships here, Jane0904. And funnily enough, I can't even get angry at Inara for trying a last-ditch effort to show Mal she loves him completely....cuz I know I would be doing the same thing were I in Inara's place:(

Still...I am glad you're sorting things out in the Mal-Inara-Freya love triangle once and for all. It's not fair to any one of them to have this pain and frustration floating about. I just hope that even if the Monster - and why do I get the feeling that the crew has already encountered the Monster in the past? - grabs Inara, that everything post-BDR works out for the best.

BEB

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