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The Right To Love - Chapter 10

Wednesday, April 11, 2007

And the angst resumes ... continuation of the Simon-centric 100 prompt story. Niska is found and Mal and Simon have to decide what to do. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara.

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A/N: As promised, here is the next chapter of The Right To Love replete with angsty goodness.

Thanks to Leiasky once again for the beta. There's no one quite like her.

Previous Chapters:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15760>Chapter 1, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15783>Chapter 2, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15892>Chapter 3, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15910>Chapter 4, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15954>Chapter 5, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16005>Chapter 6, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16062>Chapter 7, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16114>Chapter 8, http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16131>Chapter 9

Link to http://www.geocities.com/maegovannen/Firefly/Joss100Challenge.html>prompt table

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The Right To Love - Chapter 10 (Prompts 61-65)

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061. Music

It was the middle of the night and everyone else was asleep. The lanterns had been extinguished, the food and presents cleaned up. But River still stood in the middle of the clearing they had used as a dance floor, swaying to the music that flowed through her mind.

There were many different tunes swirling around and through her: the sweet lilting song of her brother and Kaylee, their love for one another ringing true in a major key with a recognizable motif that warmed River’s heart, was the clearest. There was the passionate and resonant sound of Mal and Inara, their score having started out frantic and hurried as they had made love to one another, before they’d fallen asleep, the melody working itself into a somewhat darker tune that spoke of the scars they were hiding.

There was Zoe’s song, just a couple of sad notes picked out on a piano in a minor key. Zoe’s song had always been minor, always sad, even before Wash’s death; his absence had just made

Comments
Wednesday, 11 April 2007 05:19
This felt really bleak and I have to worry with Mal and co going after Niska and no indication from River as to how it will go. I am glad Inara will be staying with Kaylee though in truth none of them are going to be able to relax or be happy agan until Niska is well and truly ended. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 11 April 2007 12:04
Oh. Ow. It hurts just reading this. Poor Kaylee. Poor Simon. Poor everyone.

The music bit was absolutely beautiful - I was very impressed.

And the ending, so heartbreaking. Now... make it better!!!!

Love love love as always xxx
Wednesday, 11 April 2007 15:05
Happy one minute and then angst-filled the next. They just never get a break for very long. At least some of them will be safe. . .

Simon gets hurt and Kaylee may well never talk to him again!
Friday, 13 April 2007 14:54
I know the odds of you killing Simon are slim, but just in case, PLEASE
Friday, 13 April 2007 14:55
don't do it!

That music part was really cool, very poetic.

Sorry about the double thing, I accidently posted.
Sunday, 15 April 2007 06:02
You have Joss tied up in your basement, don't ya TamSibling? Cuz this was some utterly beautiful work that just rang true for what Joss & co. would do to make with the powerful storytelling;)

Definitely was in awe over the completely "quiet" scene where Kaylee basically walks out into a downpour, seeking a way to wash away her fear and pain, before burying herself in the mud to hide. Utterly heart-breaking and powerful...

BEB

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