Mal4Prez felt I needed this to bookend the http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=14977> Prologue. So, I wrote this in hopes to appease her. She is, after all, a FAR better writer, so I tend to listen to what she says:)
Anyway, the Prologue and Epilogue of this story are told in 'present time'. The rest of the story is the past, and what led to these moments.
It's a bit different kind of story telling than I usually do, and when I had the idea, I wanted to explore it.
There are some things not covered in this epilogue for a reason.
Chapter 12 can be found http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=16100> Here
Thanks to Mal4Prez for the beta.
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Epilogue
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Simon winced as his back hit the deck, Kaylee’s weight hitting him directly in the gut. Sparks flew and metal whined as it was stretched to the snapping point. Lights flickered off, glass shattered, and smoke poured from cracks in seals that he should not have been able to see through. Small splinters of light shooting through the hull were nearly blinding in their sharp contrast to the dark room.
He wrapped his arms around Kaylee in an effort to shield her body from debris hurling about the room, but it was no use. There were simply too many. He couldn’t protect himself, much less the pregnant woman in his arms. But he tried. He covered her head with one hand and her abdomen with another.
The floor buckled and Simon rolled over to try and further shield Kaylee. Just as he moved, the ceiling cracked and something hurled its way down toward them like a heat seeking missile and struck Simon in the back of the head, momentarily knocking him unconscious.
He roused at the sound of Kaylee’s strangled cry, and with a groan, he glanced down to see her gasping for breath, hands tightly cradling her stomach.
Simon took a deep breath and closed his eyes in an effort to force away the dizziness. He hadn’t prayed in a long time. In the split second it took his mind to de
This is painful in its suspected outcome, but so well written, I don't mind. I think you and Mal4Prez could easily tie for that best writer title.
But in a good way
Actually no, I just want to cry.
Still, well done. Now, make it right!!
xxx
I've really enjoyed this story and can't wait to read more despite the angst.
That WAS angst incarnate! My hat goes off to you... err, that is to say, IF I had a hat to tip... well, if I did, then I would... err, yeah, that ALMOST made sense.
-Danny
Hurry on that sequel! Please!!!
I mean... crap, they're all gonna die, aren't they Even Joss isn't that mean!
I've been saying all along that two people die. . . you just won't know who until the sequel.
>Okay, now I want to cry.
That means I've done my job. Keep those tissues handy . . .
Oh. My. God.
I can't believe I'm crying for Simon.
tissues, where're the freaking tissues
Sequel. Please. 'Cause I ain't gonna be able to hold it in much longer.
You did your bloody job, mei-mei. Oh, dammn, did you do it!
You can't take the sky from me
...It was certainly well written, I'll give you that.
I don't know what to think right now.
Then you do this, you leave it like on a cliffhanger where we have to wait for 5 months during a summer break. How could you do that (runs away crying, but then comes back)
That just mean...lol but I know how it goes, and I do hope you hurry and give us more. Please, I can beg, I can demand,...say the word and I'll do it :) lol.
Great job again and I'll be waiting for the next bit!
First of all I loved it. It was an awesome gripping story. The writing was great. There were funny parts and oh the tension.
Second. - How could you! You best be writing a sequel. Are they all going to be ok I just can't wait to find out.
Thanks for a great evening, even if it did leave me somewhat anxious.
BTW - I'm really glad you all like the sequel (or if you don't like it, it's in a good way LOL!) because I really pushed her to add it!
Finally... Ha-Ha! I get to see the sequel before you guys do! :p (Except Tamsibling - she's seen it already!)
Heart-breaking, but brilliant as always.
Not really what I can say at this juncture, other than you have crafted a masterful piece of storytelling here...one that - I think - would have made a brilliant season 3 cliffhanger ending has Fox not decided to bow to the LCD mentality and can the BDS when it did. I am especially impressed with how tight this epilogue was with how much it conveyed in so few words, since we get this massive scene where the engine room is jsut dissolving around SImon and Kaylee and Simon's doing his damndest to save Kaylee and their unborn child. Really getting the feeling that the two deaths will not be solely a surprise or a given. Simon's injuries seem fatal...but we haven't gotten scenes looking at what was going on elsewhere betweens the engine room and the cockpit. Lots of potential harm could be happening in the dining room or lounge...
BEB
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