Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Monty's Place - Part X

Friday, April 6, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The epilogue. Thanks to those of you who do take the time to comment ... wish more of you would!

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Hank sat back in the pilot’s seat and grinned. He’d been checking for an hour, but no-one was following them. Likely Rankin’d only just found out the Firefly wasn't where he left it.

He sighed happily. For once they’d gotten out of a scrape without anyone losing anything, like blood or bodies. Funny how it was the one time Mal wasn't on board his own boat. He picked up one of the dinosaurs still ranged on the console.

“Course, it ain't exactly his boat no more,” he said conversationally. “I mean, I won the money that bought her back fair and square. Well, maybe not … I mean, the deck was rigged, but I still won. Took advantage of it. And getting the fool’s card? Sheer, blind luck.” He grinned wider. “But I won it. All that money. So I'm thinking that, since I graciously allowed it to be used to buy her back, she’s mine.”

“And you’re planning on telling the captain you now own Serenity?” Zoe asked from behind him, having stepped silently onto the bridge.

He turned quickly, the dinosaur flying out of his hands. “Um, well, I was … actually …” He got down on his knees to retrieve the toy from under the sensor array.

“And you think he’s going to let you get away with it?” Zoe was smiling slightly.

“I was thinking out loud,” Hank said, sitting back down and returning the dinosaur to its place. “Just rambling.”

“Really. Probably not a good idea to ramble about that sort of thing where he can hear you.”

“No. I wouldn’t do that.” He shook his head in agreement, even if his thoughts were still full of the fact that he knew who owned what.

“Good. I wouldn’t want to break someone else in. Took me long enough with you.”

“Well, if you’d only said yes when I asked first time …”

“I wasn't ready.”

He stood up, their eyes on a level. “I'm glad you are now.” Very gently, with extreme care, he reached up and took her face in his hands, pulling her towards him so their lips met. He could feel her smiling.

“Me too.”

They kissed longer, her hands in his hair, hi

Comments
MERRYWYN
Friday, 06 April 2007 18:25
I have to say that I love all of your stuff!
Friday, 06 April 2007 23:27
Terrific wrap up to this story ... although I'm concerned that Rankin is still going to be seeking revenge and might happen upon them at Monty's place.

Can we please, please, please see some Jayne/River in the next part? I think those two crazy kids need to get some things out in the open!
Friday, 06 April 2007 23:30
I have been reading your fics since you started posting, and have tried repeatedly to leave comments. Due to technological glitches, this is my first time actually being able to. You are one terrific writer!! I very rarely like OC's introduced, but Freya and Hank are awesome. I can't wait to see what's coming next!
Saturday, 07 April 2007 01:17
I really liked this storyline. It was nice to see a different side to the crew's problems and how they solved them together. Not sure why Zoe didn't want to tell Mal about the baby, though.
Monday, 09 April 2007 13:28
Even though Monty is going to swap them alcohol and vittals I'm not sure Mal and Freya will like having more people on their boat - that's if Hank doesn't try to lay claim to it. And Kaylee, that girl has rotten timing! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 13 April 2007 01:29
Uh...can we get a tiny one-shot where Hank tries to claim Serenity? Like when Hank and Mal are drinking and Hank's had a tad bit too much (post-childbirth for Zoe, maybe?), so he drunkingly admits to the events of this part of the series?

;D

All kinds of brilliant stuff here, Jane0904! Esepcially the final bit of dialogue from Jayne about Maya;D

BEB
Saturday, 22 August 2009 15:05
Im so glad to have read this verse up to here.. I cant wait to see what happens next... Love the growth and progression of the characters.. You weave a wonderfilled tale of love and happiness with smatterings of violence, misbehavin', and ANGST.

thank you.

NOW!!! Back to the story.. :)

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