Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Monty's Place - Part IX

Friday, April 6, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The game comes to a head ... I love to hear what you think, so please leave feedback. PG for adult connotations.

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The sun, as it came up over the horizon, felt so good on her skin. Mal had run inside for a couple of blankets after they’d finally climbed from the water, and they’d stretched out on the cut grass, dozing in each other’s arms. Now, as the dawn receded and the birds calmed, she lay on her own, Mal having gone to find breakfast.

She ran her hands up the outside of her thighs, her hips, above her waist, just grazing the curve of her breasts before putting her arms above her head, stretching, the sun making her feel lazy, sated, as if everything else were too much hassle.

Something wet and warm moved against her toe.

“If that’s not you, you’d better stop.” She kept her eyes tight shut.

“Which you are we talking about here?”

“Well, there’s only a few men on board Serenity, and as they’re all pretty much taken …”

“Maybe I'm the doc, and decided to get a taste of something different.”

“Well, you’re not Hank. Zoe would kill him.”

“And Kaylee wouldn’t kill Simon? How about Jayne? Maybe I'm a big mercenary of very little brain.”

Freya giggled. “Maybe.”

“Did you just giggle?”

She shook her head firmly. “No.”

“You did. You giggled.”

“I don’t giggle. I'm too old to giggle.”

Mal grinned. “I don’t think you’re too old for anything.” He put his mouth back around her toe and sucked gently.

“Mmn.”

“You like that?”

“Yes.”

“So do I. Now they’re all healed up and you‘ll let me, somehow I can’t seem to keep my hands off ‘em.” He began to massage her other foot. She jerked slightly. “Hey, you ticklish?”

“No,” she said, biting her lip.

“You are. Never knew that ‘bout you before.” He ran his thumb down her instep. “Keep learnin’ new things about you.”

“I'm … stop that! I'm not ticklish!”

“Really?” She felt him move up her leg. “How about here?” She felt his fingers graze behind her knee.

“No.” The shudder that ran through her said otherwise.

“Interesting.” He touched her thigh, just his nails pressing ever so gently into her skin, the

Comments
Friday, 06 April 2007 09:47
Rankin is so very thick, even after the tables are so eloquently turned on him he keeps on yelling Monty. Talk about an idiot taking lessons from a moron. I absolutely loved the way Hank handled the card game and River handled Rankin's goons. Yay, and they got the money! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 06 April 2007 23:23
I loved your description of the card game and the fact that Hank and Inara played the scene so brilliantly. I'm also relieved for River - that she can see she can use her abilities and not disappear into the abyss! Shiny!
Friday, 13 April 2007 00:39
Oh ho! Definitely one long piece of shiny here, Jane0904! Honestly was smiling like a madman, start to finsish;)

Gotta say though...Rankin is thicker than a lead plate! The man keeps assuming Jayne is Monty, even after being told repeatedly he ain't and the crew kicking his ass at cards. Just hope Real!Monty won't get in go se because of this:(

BEB

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