Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Monty's Place - Part VII

Wednesday, April 4, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. While Mal and Freya relax, the rest of the crew have fallen afoul of an old enemy of Monty's, and there's just one way out ... Please, if you read, feedback. Oh, and it's PG13 for adult situations.

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Mal bit down gently on Freya’s neck, sucking, knowing it was going to leave a mark. They were cuddled on the bed, the sheets thrown to the winds.

“Do you know how many hickeys I've had from you?” Freya asked, groaning slightly.

“Just making sure everyone knows you’re mine,” he said, slightly muffled. “’N’ you gave me one earlier.”

“Sometimes I walk around with more purple skin showing than normal colour.”

“So?” He lifted his head and looked into her eyes. “Anyone been complaining?”

“No. But Kaylee giggles once in a while.”

“Kaylee always giggles. And she ain’t one to talk. There’re been times she’s had hickeys in the most inappropriate places.”

Freya’s eyebrows raised. “And how would you know that?”

“I'm captain. I know these things.”

“Really.”

He laughed. “’Sides, one time she couldn’t sit down properly, and River let it slip.”

Freya smiled. “That girl …”

“Yeah.” He watched the happiness on his wife’s face be replaced by something sadder. “And she’ll be fine. Jayne’s watching out for her.”

“I know.”

“Talking of hickeys …” Mal went to work on her left breast.

“Ouch!”

“Sorry,” he said, kissing it. “Just … you’re mine and I want the ‘verse to know.”

“So you think I should go around bare-breasted?”

Mal pretended to consider. “Now that’s an idea.”

“I thought that was why you wore the wedding band.” She touched the gold ring on his finger, and while he was preoccupied bit him on the shoulder. “So you just think again.”

“Ow.”

“Sorry.” She licked his skin. “Hey, you taste nice.”

“So I should.” He looked down at her, the marks he’d just made on her skin showing pink. “How’d you feel about a tattoo?”

“Got one of those,” she pointed out. “So’ve you.”

“No. I mean, yes, but one for us.”

“Us?”

“Something we both have.” He touched the lovebite by her nipple.

“You’re thinking of a permanent hickey?”

“No.” He grinned. “Just something … so’s when I see it I know you ain't gonna ever leave me.”

She reached up to him.

Comments
Wednesday, 04 April 2007 10:30
Oh I like this though I did think that Monty didn't sound like Monty. I would have expected him to be breathing fire when he heard what had happened and offering any and all help he could rather than having to have Zoe insist on him giving them some money to try to win their boat back. Loved the Mal and Freya goodness, I hope he doesn't get her covered in tattoos though can understand the need to make sure the whole 'verse knows she belongs to him. And they need this alone time. Am looking forward to the card game and hope Hank is every bit the card sharp it sounds like he is. Hope as well that our crew gets out of this without any near death experiences. That would be shiny! And I adored Hank's comment about Simon looking sly in those clothes. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 05 April 2007 06:25
This was a great continuation ... I'm really worried about the crew but something tells me than can pull it off ... I have faith in Hank and Zoe. And I'm really glad that they didn't call Mal and Freya - it would have ruined their time together completely.

Still though ... yikes!
Monday, 09 April 2007 22:04
I too am glad they decided not to call up the Captain and his missus...but I can just imagine how pissed Mal is gonna be when he finds out eventually that Serenity came close to being permanently lost becuase of the job they took;)

Still...loved the scene between Mal and Freya - lots of spot-on couple-y dialogue and sentiments - and I honestly have to admit I thought they were gonna get Simon to be their card shark, rather than Hank. Though I can't wait to see how he fleeces Rankin;)

BEB

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