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Tranquility - Part XIV

Tuesday, April 3, 2007

Jobless and soon to be on the drift, accepting Inara's charity turns out to be the least of Mal's problems...

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Author's Note:

I mentioned in a comment I posted on chapter... eight, I think, that this was a fic set post series, going into AU rather than setting up for the movie. Sorry if it surprised a few people! I'm a Wash fangirl, so as much as I love Serenity.... Oh, and for those who are wondering about Inara... she will be appearing in this fic again, towards the end...

Thanks to everyone who's commented on this fic. I've never had such a response to my work, and I'm very grateful! =)

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Mal sits in the co-pilot’s seat of the shuttle, supremely uncomfortable as Bill pilots with serene confidence. Zone Two drops away beneath them, and silence reigns as they head from the city.

“You’re not stupid, Captain,” Bill says after a while, not looking at him.

Mal smiles thinly. “Clearly you ain’t been reading those letters from Inara closely,” he replies, “I don’t think she’d agree with your assessment.”

She laughs, compressing her lips together to dissolve her amused smile before speaking again. “You and I are both well aware that the crew of the Hugo weren’t killed by Reavers,” she continues, “It’s a shame you had to come across them at all, I was hoping you might already have passed by…”

Mal remains silent at her words, not quite sure how to react to what appears to be a casual confession to the brutal murder of an entire ship’s crew. Bill’s attention is apparently almost entirely focussed on her flying and it doesn’t feel like she’s about to kill him. He was forced to leave his gun in her office before boarding her shuttle, but he’s confident he can take her in a one-on-one fight if it comes to it. Fly the shuttle back to Serenity and…

And condemn his crew to death, too, with no fuel to get them off this moon. He sits tight, and waits for her to continue, choice less.

“They opened the boxes,” she continues, “And the people I represent don’t do complications. Lives don’t mean much to them. Not smuggler’s lives, anyway. I’m not saying what th

Comments
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 23:35
A most interesting set of developments, CaptainVimes.

Bill's intentions sound sincere, but then, some of the worst things imaginable have been done with the best of intentions...

And as for River...

She's just realized she was forced to hurt, kill, and play a critical role in guerilla warfare...

I sincerely hope that Mr. Daniels gets his just rewards for using River like a weapon...

Please continue posthaste.
Wednesday, 04 April 2007 01:23
Oh creepy stuff squared, poor River. Used and manipulated as a weapon against those she loves, betraying them to that *wangba dan* Danny. I hope he gets what he deserves. As for Bill I don't like or trust her and hope Mal and the other Captains can either find a way out of further commitment or a way to shut the gorram operation down completely. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 04 April 2007 12:52
Very nice chapter. I really liked the way you got into River's head and what was going through her mind, it seemed like something that was entirely believable.

Sitting in extreme anticipation for the next chapter.
Wednesday, 04 April 2007 19:04
Oh my gosh. What's going to happen to Mal? I'm so scared for him.

Keep writing please!!
Thursday, 05 April 2007 18:43
Excellent chapter. I like how Bill plays to the good guy playing bad guy playing good guy nature of Mal and his fellow captains. Nice capture of River's mindset and confusion.

By the way, I miss Wash as well. It was almost painful not being able to use him in my own screenplay.

Keep up the good work.

Rob O.
Sunday, 08 April 2007 06:24
Oh...this was definitely all kinds of shiny stuff here, captainvimes! Especially the final part of the chapter where River is in weapon mode and all she - and the audience as well - perceives in playing a game like she used to when she was little; reading River's thoughts and feelings as she violently injures and/or kills the guards - innocent or not - is both enlightening and creepifying, since it's only our previously gained knowledge that allows us to be more aware of the situation than River is.

BEB

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