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Monty's Place - Part VI

Tuesday, April 3, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The job starts, while Mal and Freya continue to play ... If you read and like, or not, please leave feedback/ratings. Pretty please? PG for implied adult situations.

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“Monty’s been meaning to do this for a long time,” Inara said, looking at Magdalene coming up towards them. “We make the delivery, and then we all get paid.”

“Good.” Jayne nodded approvingly. “Could do with some extra coin.”

“I wonder if it’ll be enough for the de-oxidiser?” Kaylee considered idly, Bethany holding her hand.

“Well, Cap ain’t getting a share,” the big man replied. “He’s too busy with Freya, getting his –“

“Jayne.”

“Uncle Mal ’n’ Auntie Freya?” Bethany asked, her eyes wide. “What they doing?”

“Resting, honey,” Kaylee said, swinging her daughter up into her arms and glaring at Jayne. “They’re having a nice rest. So we’re gonna do the work instead.”

“Beth’ny can help.”

“You gonna lug them crates outside, eh, short stub?” Jayne asked, his face softening as he looked at the little girl.

“Strong.” She held out an arm, bent at the elbow as she’d seen Jayne do more than once.

Jayne felt her little muscles. “Hell, you could take me any day,” he agreed.

“Hell, yes,” she said, and giggled.

“It wouldn’t be so bad if she didn’t know in what context to use language like that,” Simon said, stepping onto the bridge and sighing heavily.

“Hey, ain’t my fault she picks up everything,” Jayne said, hitching his thumbs in his belt. “Man can’t go round watchin’ every word he says.”

“Some thought would be good.”

“Doc, I could teach her words’d make even your hair curl.”

“Don’t even think about it.”

Hank turned from where he was making final course corrections. “So who are we delivering to?”

“Someone called O’Malley. Monty said he was glad to take these particular items off him. And for a good price.” Inara smiled, feeling amazingly self-satisfied.

“He’s gonna be waiting for us?”

“He has an office at the docks. All we have to do is go there, tell him we’ve arrived, and get paid.”

Simon stirred uneasily. “You know, he sounds very similar to Badger.”

“Then we’ll go armed.”

“Weren’t planning on leaving home without one of the girls,” Jayne sa

Comments
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 11:52
I loved the whole Mal and Freya goodness but this bit with Rankin wanting to take over Serenity and sending men to board her etc doesn't sit right. I can't see Monty stiffing anyone (unless they were gorram Alliance moles) and what about those still on Serenity? Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 15:53
I think there's more to this tale, Amdobell. Even if Monty would stiff someone, I don't see him setting up Mal to take the fall for it. And as far as the ship goes, I think River is going to work out some of her grief issues by kicking some of Rankin's goons' pigus all over Serenity's cargo bay. I almost feel sorry for them. Almost. :)
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 16:24
Oh, I think we might be putting a bit too much faith in Monty and his above board dealings. He did leave Mal stranded on a planet with Saffron because the man told him the truth about his "wife."

Although, I don't know if Monty would set Inara up - as they did seem to be getting along. I love Freya and Mal's light, easy banter ... it's nice to see them able to enjoy one another's company, although Mal is going to be livid when he finds out the danger that befell them.

And I too hope that River finds a way to work out her grief issues on Rankin's men. *sigh* Oh yes, that would be shiny!
Friday, 06 April 2007 05:52
Hmm...gotta agree with the mob and say I can't imagine Monty screwing over the BDHs less he didn't know about O'Malley. Or he was forced into setting the crew up by someone...cuz the name "Rankin" rings a bell for me:(

Still...lovely but of storytelling here, Jane! Can't wait to see River mop the floor with Rankin's goons;D

BEB

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