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The Right To Love - Chapter 7

Monday, April 2, 2007

Next set of prompts in the Simon-centric 100 prompt story. Kaylee is having a hard time dealing with the afteraffects of her torture - much to Simon's distress. Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara.

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A/N: Sorry for the delay - here is the next chapter in my Simon/Kaylee angst fest!

As promised - the angst just keeps on comin'!

Thanks again to Leiasky for the beta ... and everything else.

And don't forget those comments ... I'd hate to have to threaten you with something like - refusing to update!!! Yes, I'm a meanie!

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The Right To Love - Chapter 7 (Prompts 51-55)

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051. Destruction

River awoke, panting and breathless. With wide eyes she took in the small confines of her bunk, the buttery yellow walls, the little space and with barely a thought, she pushed the covers off her body, whipping open the screen door and bolting into the cargo bay.

Once she was in the cavernous room, she felt her heart rate slow, her breathing returning to normal. Crying silent tears, she closed her eyes for a moment, searching for the root of her distress. With an audible gasp, her eyes snapped open and she realized things were only going to get worse. Shaking a bit, she ascended the stairs, taking up her favorite spot on the catwalks above and lying down on the cold metal. Soon, she wasn’t alone.

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She couldn’t breathe, really. This wasn’t the imagined breathlessness of her dreams; no Kaylee was good and awake and she could not breathe. Heaving as her lungs fought for air that wouldn’t come, she sat up in the bunk, fighting the pain that shot through her still bruised ribs.

With tears running down her cheeks and her heart ready to beat out of her chest, Kaylee pushed her covers off, and staggered to her feet, her left leg still encased in a cast making it difficult for her to stand. She swayed dangerously over Simon and he woke quickly, his eyes wide as soon as he realized that he too, was not dreaming.

Rising, he encircled her waist with a strong arm and tried to sit her back on the bed. “Kaylee, it’s all right. You’re okay. Just lie back down.”

Shaking her head, Kaylee couldn’t form words. The room was so small and getting smaller. Why were the w

Comments
Monday, 02 April 2007 20:55
She cant leave Serenity!! This is getting complicated and I'm loving every minute of it!!! Update soon PLEASE!!
Monday, 02 April 2007 22:03
I loved River in this one, talking sense to Kaylee in a way that she could not fail to take notice of. Just hope she listens because you can't run away from your heart. So what happened to the rest of the crew or was Zoe just a brief guest in this story? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 01:44
Some really dark, touching stuff here, I love it.
And the River/Kaylee scene was great.
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 19:32
Oh dear. It's going from bad to worse. Poor Kaylee, poor Simon.

Fix it! lmao.

Love this, brilliant as always!

xx
Thursday, 05 April 2007 22:43
I think Kaylee needs more than just Simon or her parents. River too needs to have input and time with Kaylee as she heals emotionally. One doesn't struggle back from the level of mental instability for months of torture and abuse without gaining some insight and wisdom to the whole process.

And I was completely floored at how great this chapter was, TamSibling! The scenes with River sensing Kaylee's distress and Simon struggling to sooth Kaylee after her panic attack just jumped off the screen for me to rest in my mind's eye so I could picture all that was happening.

BEB

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