Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Monty's Place - Part IV

Sunday, April 1, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. PG13 for adult situations. Mal and Freya discover the wonders of the bathroom at Monty's place ... I love to know what you think, so please feedback!

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3750    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“You didn’t tell him,” Hank said as they wandered back to the ship.

“Neither did you.” Zoe stared ahead.

“I was kinda hoping you might say something so I wouldn’t have to.”

“Are you afraid of him?”

“Nope.” Hank shook his head firmly. “Ain’t afraid of no-one. ‘Cept you, course.”

“How it should be.”

“It’s just … you do want this baby, don’t you?” He stopped, trying to see her.

She turned, a dark figure in the dark night. “Hank, we didn’t plan this. And I …” She swallowed. “I’m scared. Not of what the captain’s going to say. But …”

He pulled her to him, enveloping her in his arms. “I’m here, Zo. You ain’t gonna do this alone.”

“I know.” She looked into his eyes. “And you stink.”

Hank took umbrage. “What? There I am being all loving and supportive and you say I stink?”

Zoe stepped away from him and waved her hand in front of her face. “It’s cigars. And that punch. How much of it did you drink?”

“Not that much.” He put his palm over his mouth and huffed, sniffing in quickly. “Can’t smell a thing.”

“If you think you’re coming to bed with me, you’re going to shower first.”

“Baby …”

“Or you don’t come to bed.”

“That’s cruel. I know damn well you’ll be asleep by the time I get back. Your head hits that pillow and you’re out, I’ve seen it. And I just think that’s -”

“Who said you’d be showering alone?” She turned back to Serenity, walking in her usual stately fashion.

Hank stared, then a grin appeared on his face. This night just keeps getting better and better.

---

Mal was right. It was a bath. A big bath. A big round bath. People could get lost in that bath. And Freya wanted to find out just how much fun that could be.

She turned on one of the taps experimentally, and hot water gushed out.

“Kaylee said it’d work fine, once she got the generator going,” Mal explained.

“Where does the water come from?” Freya watched as steam began to fill the room.

“Pumped from the lake.” He watched her run her fingers o

Comments
Sunday, 01 April 2007 11:02
At last some Mal/Freya goodness! Thought I was gonna die for the lack, it has been one very long dry spell. Hope this isn't the only bit of shiny tenderness we get. Just lapped it up. I also loved how River found comfort with Jayne, his silent understanding saying far more than a thousand awkward words. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 01 April 2007 16:25
Wonderful in all the right ways ... I too love that River can find comfort with Jayne and I do feel so badly for her. She's got to be grieving beyond a level that maybe any of them can understand.

Yay for Mal/Freya and for Hank and Zoe - although their reluctance to tell Mal still bothers me a bit. I hope we get some more goodness ...
Tuesday, 03 April 2007 06:45
Damn...when you bust a dry spell, you do it in style, Jane! Cuz I'll be damnned to Book's Special Hell if I couldn't picture Mal and Freya getting all kinds of intimate;D

Also? Really loved the final moment with River finding comfort with Jayne. Not because I love me any kind of Rayne I can get - and I do - but because they are on a similar wavelength emotionally. They are drawing comfort from one another as crewmates and friends...but with a deeper bond slowly starting to grow back again:D

BEB

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