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Monty's Place - Part II

Friday, March 30, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. 2BF. Serenity lands on Lazarus, and the crew start to relax. Please leave me feedback, good or bad.

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Serenity dropped down into a patch of long grass that had once been a meadow, setting her supports onto the soft soil before the ramp dropped and the cargo bay doors opened.

“Oh, smell that,” Kaylee said, taking a deep breath, Bethany captivated in her arms. She gazed out towards dark smudges of hills on the horizon, gentle undulations that made it look like it was a sea frozen in motion.

“Smells like horseshit,” Jayne said. River thumped him on the arm on her way past and he grinned.

“Thanks,” Kaylee said.

“You’re welcome.” The young woman stepped down into the grass and wriggled her toes. “I like this.” She began to run, her hair whipping out behind her, trying to outpace the sadness in her heart.

Simon, a step behind his wife, said, “River –“

“She’s okay, honey,” Kaylee said, turning and smiling at him as he watched her disappear.

“Ain't no trouble she can get into around here,” Mal said, walking down to the ground himself, Ethan sat on his hip. “Nearest town’s over a hundred klicks from here, and I doubt even she could keep going that far. ‘N’ if she meets anything at all that’s a threat … well, I’d lay good money on her being the one to come back.”

“But still …”

“Stop worrying about her, and start figuring on having a good time.” He looked back over his shoulder. “And that’s an order.”

Freya moved up behind the young doctor and put her arm around his shoulders. “Or else,” she added softly.

Simon smiled. “Well, if it’s an order …” He still wanted to chase his sister, help her, make things better, but the sun was warm, and no matter what Jayne said, the smell reminded him of summers when he was a child.

“Momma, play with me,” Bethany said, trying desperately to get down.

“I gotta coupla things to do first,” her mother said. “Then we’ll play.”

“No, it’s okay,” Simon said unexpectedly. He looked out into the hot morning air. “It’s too nice to stay inside. We’ll go, give you time to finish, then you can join us.”

“Daddy come with me?” Bethany asked, h

Comments
Friday, 30 March 2007 13:53
"take the balls off a flea."
I love this line! just like jayne!
Friday, 30 March 2007 14:20
Yay for more fluff! I love the bit with Simon, Kaylee and Bethany at the end - they are such a great family. I hope the pang of wanting another child fades once they both realize how blessed they already are.

And I really like River's interactions with Jayne. Something tells me this party is the perfect time for Hank and Zoe to make their announcement!

And where is Monty, that ol' sasquatch?
Friday, 30 March 2007 17:38
I was wondering where Monty was as well as I can't imagine Mal just bringing his crew along and taking over his friend's house without so much as a by-your-leave. I think the party will be the perfect time for Zoe and Hank to give their news, and it's not like Mal can complain with him wanting to have another child with Freya. I'm thinking they need to build a creche aboard Serenity! And so nice to see the crew get some time to relax planet-side, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 30 March 2007 17:42
wow you rock ,keep them coming and let Jayne and River finally be together
Saturday, 31 March 2007 03:22
Simon can't swim, huh? Well know...dunno if I can picture that. Simon strikes mas the type of person who would find a way to learn regardless;)

Still...this was a lovely chapter here, Jane0904! I really have to give much props for the fabulous conversation Mal and Freya had about trying for another child - completely believable banter and thoughts surrounding adding another member to the Reynolds brood - and the final scene between Simon, Kaylee and Bethany was all kinds of adorable:D

BEB

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