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Monty's Place - Part I

Friday, March 30, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Set a couple of weeks after COMMUNICATION, Mal and the Serenity crew take some time out to relax, only maybe things don't go quite as planned. Please read, and please, please comment/rate - I need it!

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“Good, you’re all here,” Mal said as he stepped down into the galley, Ethan on his hip, Freya behind him. Even River was sitting in her seat for the first time since Jethro died. She was pushing her food around her plate until she caught Jayne’s eye and started to eat.

“Where else’d we be?” Kaylee asked, giving Bethany the spoon so she could feed herself.

“Just that I've got a little bit of news.”

“You ain't pregnant again, are you?” Jayne put in.

“No, Jayne, I'm not,” Mal said straight-faced. “And neither is Freya.” He slipped Ethan into the high chair next to him.

“Then what?”

“I've been talking to Monty –“

“Monty? Ooh, how is he?” Kaylee grinned. She really liked the old curmudgeon, and it had been a whole long while since they’d seen him last.

“Still pi –“ Mal glanced at Bethany and changed the adjective he was going to use. “Still killing himself with laughter that I didn’t call on him as a character witness when Saffron tried to have me arrested for bigamy.”

“I still don’t know why you didn’t,” Simon put in.

“’Cause all it’d’ve proved was that he was as much an idiot as I was. And wouldn’t’ve proved I weren't married to that po fu .”

“Monty’s not an idiot,” Kaylee said, defending her friend.

“Yeah, well, if he’d turned up he would’ve been.” Mal sighed, remembering the red-headed woman with absolutely nothing approaching affection. “Anyway, he’s agreed to let us take our ease at his place on Lazarus.”

“A holiday?”

“A few days,” Mal amended. “Just to recharge our batteries. I think we could all do with a few days down time, and it’s summer there, so –”

“Ain’t been there in so long,” Kaylee went on quickly. “Just that one time.” She turned to Simon. “Before you even came on board. It’s so pretty.”

“It’s a dump,” Jayne put in.

“It’s not so bad,” Zoe said.

Kaylee was bubbling over with excitement. “There’s a lake, and an orchard, and –”

“Can I finish?” Mal raised his voice.

“Oh, sorry, Cap’n,” Kaylee said, not at all sorry real

Comments
Friday, 30 March 2007 08:47
Lovely! And I did laugh at Simon cheating at that fishing competition. Who would have thought he was a criminal mastermind in the making way back then? So good to see Mal and Freya on track with each other again, hoping for more Maya goodness and that River continues to get better. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 30 March 2007 11:11
Nice to see some fluffy fluff once in a while Jane0904. It's nice to see almost all the crew present in a scene, it makes it feel like the show.
Friday, 30 March 2007 13:20
Wonderful as usual. I'll be interested to see how you fit Monty into the mix, but with the grasp you have of all the other characters, you are either Joss' daughter, wife, or the operation he didn't tell anyone about was a stunning success. Or maybe you're his twin. I haven't exactly sussed it all out yet.
Friday, 30 March 2007 14:08
This is a nice bit of fluff ... I'm glad to see the crew bantering back and forth - and all of Simon's snark was well-placed and absolutely in character!

... Now about River ...
Friday, 30 March 2007 22:54
Utterly classics verbal repartee here, Jane0904! Especially Mal's moments of good-natured frustration at how his crew just runs circles around unless a threat is happening;D

Also got to give you props for not ignoring River's situation for the moment, in the name of having some fluff. It was good to see her bantering with Simon in her usual bratty way...though I do hope this piece of shininess will help her along the path to dealing with her grief;)

BEB
MAL5981
Saturday, 31 March 2007 00:35
Shiny Jane0904, very shiny!

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