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On The Edge: Chapter 8

Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Kaylee has a little emergency as the crew prepares to be separated. Post film. S/K.

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I know. I know. This has taken me SO long to get out. I've been busy, promotion at work and all the lovely responsibilities that come along with it.

Chapter 7 can be found http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=15538>; Here.

The next two chapters have been beta'd and I have a few changes to make but it shouldn't be more than a few days before I get the next chapter up.

Thanks to Tamsibling and Mal4Prez for the beta.

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Chaper 8

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“We’re two weeks out from where we’re supposed to meet Zoe’s contact,” Mal said, sparing a brief look to everyone sitting around the table. “We’ll be dropping Inara, Kaylee and Madeline off on Newhall since we’re passin’ right close to the planet anyway. All goes well, we’ll come back an’ get ‘em when were’ done.”

“All don’t go well, we don’t never see you again,” Kaylee said beneath her breath.

“Least you’ll be alive,” Mal said firmly. He didn’t want to discuss this any further. There was a tension between Simon and Kaylee, though they tried to hide it. It wasn’t fair to separate them now, not with Kaylee so close to delivering. But – he’d made his decision. His crew needed to accept it.

“Are we done here?” Inara said, her voice short and curt.

“We’re done discussin’ all you need to hear,” came Mal’s quick retort. If he showed weakness now, there was no telling what would happen. He needed to hold out until they got back.

“Good.” Inara stood and walked out, the hem of her dress brushing the deck as she smoothly disappeared around the nearest corner.

Kaylee pushed herself to her feet, determined to talk to her friend, but frowned when Simon stood to assist.

“I’m fine, Simon,” Kaylee said. She was perfectly capable of getting up on her own. She was pregnant, not an invalid.

Simon dropped his arm but continued to watch her with a physician’s trained eye.

“Need to keep an eye on the engine. Make sure nothin’ breaks.” Kaylee met his gaze with a firm one of her own. “I’m not gonna bre

Comments
Tuesday, 27 March 2007 06:14
Oy - the tension! Kill me why don't ya?

The whole thing with Simon and Kaylee arguing over whether she should go just chills me. Only because it's an unenviable position for them both, but also because I get the distinct impression they may not see each other again ... But you wouldn't do that *gulps* Would you?!?!?!?!

And I really do love Maddy. Her little bit at the end of chapter 8 about hating her mother was so poignant and dead on for a little kid. And it helps explain why she's so skittish around the women.

So gorram shiny - this is why you're my hero!
Tuesday, 27 March 2007 12:27
That's weird, I just posted up a comment and it came up... blank! Gorramit, the ruttin' Alliance have stolen my feedback. Seriously, this is brilliant! Loved Kaylee and Simon's dialogue which at times was frustratingly painful. Little Maddy is a wonderful creation but I don't like her parents. Aaron is as chillingly selfish in his planned betrayal of the crew as Maris is in her capture of them. And why oh why can't River be coherent BEFORE the *goushi* hits the fan? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 27 March 2007 12:32
YAY! You updated!

Loved this - I really feel for both Simon and Kaylee, its a no-win situation. But I have faith everything will turn out okay in the end ... right...?

As for the lil' cliffie.... you are just mean. Brilliant, but mean. LMAO

xxx
Tuesday, 27 March 2007 14:27
Oh crap, now they've been kidnapped.
Bet there's a few of people onboard who feel a bit stupid for sending them away.
Wednesday, 28 March 2007 02:30
Well now...been a while since I last immersed myself in this tale, Leiasky. Gotta say it's like riding a bicycle;D

Ooh...mucho props for the Silee tension! Definitely could see this kind of occurence if Kaylee got pregnant and the two men in her life (Mal and Simon) are adamant that she be removed from the danger. Only probably is that she - and the other people being sent off to Newhall - are not safe, regardless of their location:(

Oh, before I forget, is the name of Maddy's mother deliberate? Cuz I have to admit that every time I read the name "Maris"...I think of Niles Crane's never-seen harridan of a wife from "Frasier." Could strangely imagine David Hyde Pierce in the Aaron role all of a sudden;)

BEB
Wednesday, 28 March 2007 21:48
Mal spared a cursory glance at the screen. “You know how it is. History is written by the winners.”

“They ain’t won yet, Sir.”

Love that exchange, so Joss.

Also really liked the family-feel of everyone waiting to hear about Kaylee.
Saturday, 31 March 2007 19:02
okay..deep breaths, deep breaths. relax.
Tension's so gorram thick it'd take a chainsaw to get through it, lol. Love the waiting in the wings of the crew with Kaylee, but Zoe was conspicuously absent..hmmm, lil' bit o' resentment there..the baby she and Wash will never have?.
Damn fine writing, Leiasky, as always!
Thursday, 12 April 2007 19:40
Poor Maddy. It's unfair that she's in the situation she is, and I really do feel for her. I was a bit shocked at the sudden change in emotion from her, missing her mum to suddenly hating her. Explains why she's wary around the other women though! I hope she does get to see that they're not all like that.

So much angst, it makes my heart sad! Very good chapter though :-)

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