Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Communication - Part XVIII

Sunday, March 25, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Inara gets to meet her son, and Mal finds out the Guild's secret. The light is at the end of the tunnel, so stick with me, even if it's an oncoming train! Read/rate/feedback ...

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Domina put her arm around the boy. “He’s not your son.”

“Why don’t we go inside?” Mal said. “It’s kinda hot out here, and I could do with sitting in the shade.” He smiled. “’Sides, I don’t like talking when there’s a rifle trained on me.” He looked up towards the first floor and the glint of sunlight on a gun barrel. “Ain’t planning on shooting anyone, so I’d take it as a kindness if you’d do the same.”

“I don’t …” Domina looked down, almost embarrassed at being caught out, then up again in defiance at this tall man with the piercing blue eyes. “This isn’t a conversation I want to have in front of my son.”

Inara bridled, but Hank spoke quickly, running a hand through his untidy brown hair. “Why don’t I keep your … the boy entertained out here?” He grinned at Colm, who smiled tentatively back. “We won’t go anywhere.”

“I don’t know …” Domina said doubtfully.

“Good idea, Hank,” Mal agreed. “Ain’t planning on kidnapping either, Mrs Gerhardt. So, shall we?” He indicated she should go first.

“Mal …” Inara murmured.

“Take it easy. And remember to breathe.”

She shot him a sharp look but followed.

“So,” Hank said, still smiling. “You’re Colm.”

“Yes.” The boy looked at him.

“I’m Hank. And that’s my boat.” He flicked his thumb over his shoulder.

“Yours?”

“I’m the pilot.”

“Oh.” He paused then said, “She’s a Firefly.”

“That she is,” Hank said, surprised. “How’d you know that?”

Colm pulled a magazine from his back pocket. “I know about ships.” He stepped closer and showed Hank the pictures. There, in all her glory, was a Firefly.

“Hey, how old is this?” Hank asked, turning to the front cover.

“I found it in some of my poppa’s stuff,” Colm admitted. “He said it was rubbish, that I could keep it.”

“Not rubbish.”

Colm grinned. “No. Do you really fly her?”

“I surely do.”

“What’s it like?”

Hank sighed happily. “Well, let me tell you …”

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Freya watched from inside the cargo bay as the others went into the house, leaving Hank to lo

Comments
Sunday, 25 March 2007 10:15
Oh, poor Inara - but she had to know she couldn't take her son from the only family he's ever known.

And River ... oh, things are going to get much, much worse, aren't they? Can't wait for the next bit!
Sunday, 25 March 2007 12:37
So much in this part pulling the emotions every which-way. This has to be approached with baby steps not giant strides. Every single person involved needs to act from the point of view of what is best for Colm rather than treating the child like a piece of property then squabbling over the ownership of him. I know because it happened to me. Handled properly the boy will end up with two families and be enriched by both. Handled as a tug of war and everybody loses, Colm most of all. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 25 March 2007 20:14
Really wondering where this is going to end up - hopefully more on the fluff side than the angst for the sake of everyone's continued sanity.
Monday, 26 March 2007 03:48
Oh...things have gotten all kinds of awkward, I must say. Inara is a step short of fighting mad, Domina is pretty much ready to kill anyone who flinches wrong to keep Colm, and the Guild is not looking all that shiny right now with the revelation they were spies during the War.

Also gotta wonder how Colm is gonna take finding out that Domina's not his birth mother? Cuz it's gonna come out and cause even more problems...just hope the right steps are taken once that happens.

BEB

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