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Communication - Part XII

Tuesday, March 20, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. River may be naked, but she's in control. Inara isn't, even though Mal and the others are nearly there. Please leave feedback/rate - it makes my day!

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The shuttle locked on and Hank immediately powered her down. In a moment Mal had the door open, gingerly peering around the corner, but there was no-one in sight.

“Mal,” Freya murmured. “I think everyone’s in the ballroom.”

“River and Inara with them?”

She shook her head. “I can’t tell.”

“Well, makes it easier. If we come across anyone, they’re probably bad guys.”

“’Specially if they’re shooting at us,” Hank put in, wiping his hands together then down his pants.

“Yeah, that does kinda take the guesswork out of things.” Mal looked at his crew. “Jethro, you roam with Jayne. Zoe –“

“Aw, Mal, why does he have to come with me?” the big man asked.

“Because I said so.” Mal glared at him. “Zoe, Simon, with me. Hank, you stay here with Frey.”

“Mal?” His pilot stared at him.

“Frey’s staying put, and so are you.”

“But –“

“And I don’t have time to argue.” Mal eased his way out into the other ship. “Come on.”

---

Jones ran his fingers down River’s face. “It would be such a pity to destroy such beauty. But I will if I have to.” His hand continued down her chest, but stopped as he felt her gaze on him. “Yes, well.” He stepped back, going to the com. “But I don’t really have the time to enjoy myself.”

---

Inara listened as the voice, almost like Mal’s in timbre, sounded over the ship’s system.

“Miss Serra. I have your sister. And a pretty little thing she is too. Even with the goosebumps.”

No. Not like Mal’s. There was ice under the banter, a heart frozen with no remorse.

“Course, she won’t stay that way unless you come out.”

“God, no!” Inara screamed, tugging on the door.

“So many things I could do, and not a one of ‘em fatal. Not yet.”

“I'm here!” she shouted, banging on the wood, trying to break it with her bare hands.

“You have five minutes to get to the ballroom, as I'm feeling generous, and you might be hiding.” He laughed and shut the com down.

---

“River?” Simon said. “Does he mean –“

“I reckon he does,” Mal agreed,

Comments
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 10:46
Oh, that *tamade hundan* is so going to die screaming! Can't wait to see River teach him the error of his ways. And neat that Jayne can hear River inside his head and I could feel Jayne's smugness when he found that Jethro couldn't. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 16:54
I love that River is so in control of her situation and that no one else can quite believe it.

And I really love the fact that Jayne can still hear River - it's just great! Poor Freya though - she is just not catching a break. I think Mal needs to spirit her away somewheres for a bit so she can really heal.
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 20:02
Keep it up your a great writer
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 23:03
Oh...I can just picture Adam giving Jayne an expression that is the epitome of smug right then! Cuz Jayne would be ten kinds of arrogant and prideful in knowing that he can get psychic messages from River when her snugglebunny can't;D

Brilliant work here, Jane0904! Absolutely brilliant!

BEB

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