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Communication - Part XI

Monday, March 19, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. The Marrakech is in trouble, and Serenity flies to the rescue. Good/bad? Let me know!

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Captain Branscombe heard the airlock door open, and he turned. “What the …”

“Just be calm, play nice, and no-one’s going to get hurt,” said the man in front, his gun not wavering.

“What do you want?”

“One of your passengers.”

The Captain shook his head. “No. No-one is being taken off my ship.”

“Really.” The man smiled. “I don’t think you’ve got that much of a choice.” He jerked his head, and five of his men hurried past, each heavily armed. They disappeared out of the door.

“Where are they going?”

“To stop your men doing anything foolish.”

“We’re a liner. We don’t have armed guards.”

The man laughed. “Then maybe you should.”

The officer behind Captain Branscombe made a move towards the weapons locker and the sound of the gun firing was loud in that confined space. The officer cried out, clutching his shoulder. Branscombe went to move forward, but the man in front of him moved his gun back smoothly.

“I told you to play nice.”

“Who do you want?” Branscombe asked, trying to ignore the moans of pain behind him.

“No-one of any consequence. A woman. Her name’s Inara Serra.”

Branscombe couldn’t stop the look of surprise crossing his face, and the man smiled.

---

“River, wait.” Inara tugged on the young woman’s arm. “Where are we going?”

“You have to hide. They’ve come for you.” River’s eyes darted up and down the corridor.

“Who?”

“Men. To stop you.”

“Stop me from what? River, tell me!”

“I don’t know.” The girl fixed her eyes on Inara. “I don’t know yet. There’s no coherence, no facts to be laid out end to end … but I have to hide you. Come on.”

“That doesn’t make sense.”

River’s head went up, as if she was scenting the air. “They’ve hurt someone. Please, hurry.”

Inara allowed herself to be dragged along.

---

The leader of the invading crew stepped into the ballroom. “This is pleasant,” he said, looking around. “This will do nicely.”

“Do? For what?” Branscombe asked.

“Call everyone here.”

“Do you have

Comments
Monday, 19 March 2007 10:07
Jeese!!

Poor River! I love your works, Jane. But... What's happening to River? What's wrong with her?

I find it a little weird that Mal will let her come to the raid.

Jeese, you got me wantin' more so bad i'd almost kill you if you don't post the next one tonight. But, I am only joking. So, yeah. That's brilliant. =)

Love yas!
Monday, 19 March 2007 11:00
KayleeBird I think you need to read the story again, there is nothing wrong with River and Mal did not let her come on the raid. River stowed away with Inara, hence why she is on that gorram ship with her in the first place.
Jane0904 I am loving this but really want something bad to happen to those *tamade hundan*, and as for stripping River's dress off and leaving her naked I'm thinking they are going to pay for that and wish they'd never been born. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 19 March 2007 16:16
Well, at least if she's naked she won't have to wash their blood out of her clothes. It saves time and avoids all that messy scrubbing and dishpan hands.

Great writing, as always!
Monday, 19 March 2007 20:22
Uh...don't take this the wrong way, Jane0904, but....the final imagery of the intruders strippin' River nekkid? Not taking to the right frame of mind, if ya know what I mean. Still...naked ass kicking will certain be quite the sight to picture, and BSCPatherfan's comment is quite true;D

BEB
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 03:07
Terrific - although like everyone else, I'm just a mite worried about River. But she'll kick ass, naked or not!

I love this and the tension is building quite nicely! More, more, more!
Tuesday, 20 March 2007 06:26
Sorry. Heh. Amb, I'm sorry about that. :P

I was very tired last night and couldn't get out what I wanted to say. I'll say it proper this time.

Jeese!!

Poor River! I love your works, Jane. But... What's happening to River? What's wrong with her? Why is she.. er, naked?

I find it a little weird that Mal will let her- FREYA- come to the raid thing, albeit in the shuttle.

Jeese, you got me wantin' more so bad i'd almost kill you if you don't post the next one tonight. But, I am only joking. So, yeah. That's brilliant. =)

Only almost. :P

Love yas!

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