Bad Day 5
Saturday, July 24, 2004
Intrigue and Explanations.
CATEGORY: FICTION
TIMES READ: 2751
RATING: 9.0 (PG)
SERIES: FIREFLY
“An’ you just left him?” Kaylee gapped at Inara in astonishment. The gentle shudder of the small shuttle as it hit atmo barely registered.
“I had to,” Inara said briskly and quickly went through the pre-entry sequence. A small frown tugged at her lips and she finally sighed her face softening into something like regret. “It… it wasn’t easy,” she said softly. “He’s just so…” her lips tightened and a look of exasperation twisted her lips. “gorram stubborn.”
The curse sounded odd coming from the Companion’s lips, but Kaylee nodded wisely in agreement. If there was one thing the Captain was, it was stubborn. “He gets like that,” Kaylee said quietly. “‘Specially about stuff he cares about. Not that he’d ever admit to carin’ about anything except the ship.”
”Hmm.” Inara made a noncommittal noise of agreement, but the slightly fiery look in her eyes revealed a little more heat behind that bland sound.
“Not that he don’t care,” Kaylee said quickly. “I just don’t think he’s… comfortable ‘bout showin’ it.” She looked at the elegantly dressed woman who was proficiently landing the shuttle. “Know what I mean?”
Inara sighed and couldn’t repress her the eye roll of annoyance. “Yes very much so.” The small craft settled to earth with a small bump and Inara went through the post-landing procedures. She ignored the silent, insistent call that blinked to life.
Kaylee nibbled at a ragged fingernail and then looked at Inara again with anxiety. “You sure he was ok? Now what happened again?”
Inara sighed and thought back to the overwhelming terror she had been put through a week ago. Mal had been on the way “out” when she was coming back from one of her “diplomatic missions.”
Inara motioned Kaylee to follow her into the back of the small vessel. “I’ll tell you while you’re getting ready.” Kaylee’s face paled a little but she set her jaw with determination and began to strip out of the familiar jumpsuit she usually wore. “Sit,” Inara commanded and Kaylee settled nude, and not a little uncomfortably, onto
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 24 July 2004 23:03
I did not see one single explanation in there.
Saturday, 24 July 2004 23:22
you werent looking hard enough then :p ;)
Sunday, 25 July 2004 10:20
I get it! I get it.... or wait well kind of. Anyway, this is a great story. And Kaylee as a companion? Wow. Now thats definetley a twist!
Sunday, 25 July 2004 12:50
At least Kaylee's ok. On the one hand, it's not fair that our crew weren't let in on the secret. On the other hand, we could well believe Mal would keep a similar secret. Can't wait to see what the secret is.
Sunday, 25 July 2004 13:57
I dont believe Kaylee is really a companion. it is merely a deception, to whome the deception is aimed I am not yet entirely sure but Im on the edge of my seat waiting to find out more. one point i am a little confused on though. The "preachers plan"... now the story seemed to suggest that Book and Inara did not meet on Serenity. I had always assumed that Inara had joined that Inara had taken residence in the Shuttle shortly after the purchace of the ship, being some years previous to the seemingly coincidental pichup of the preacher... but as I thought about it, the shoe never actually put a 'when' to the seen involving the first meeting of Mal & Inara and the shuttle purchase. Well spotted storyteller. Please, tell us more...
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 24 August 2004 23:58
Are there any more coming soon
Wednesday, 06 October 2004 21:47
yes.
just havent wrote the end in my head yet yet.
Wednesday, 28 June 2006 07:36
well this is intriguiing. will be interested to follow and see where its going. BTW Luke - Inara tells the Shepherd she has been on board for 8 months when he arrives, so not years at all.
Wednesday, 28 June 2006 07:37
dammit, I just looked at the date and realised I aint never gone here the end of this tale. Gorram it.
Wednesday, 23 November 2011 06:26
Oh wow, this is gorram shiny!!! I know it's been a while, but PLEEAAAASE finish this??(:
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