Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Communication - Part IX

Saturday, March 17, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. River is having a good time, while Jethro and Jayne talk. Also Zoe has something to think about. Sorry about no second bite Friday, but I hope this makes up for it! Read, comment, rate and enjoy!

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Inara walked down the steps into the liner’s ballroom, and for once didn’t actually feel like the centre of attention. Oh, she was beautiful, she knew that, dressed in dark red velvet, long gloves to her elbows, but it was River, wearing one of her plainest gowns, her glossy dark hair swept up into a low roll at her neck, who had caught everyone’s attention.

The dress, a deep gold, was cut on the bias and hung from thin straps, curving around her slight figure. However, it was the girl inside the dress, the lightest touch of lipstick all that adorned her face, that had all the men watching her, and all the women wondering who she was.

Captain Branscombe stood up from his seat, the other men at the table following, as the pair walked towards him. “My dears, you both look stunning.”

“Thank you,” Inara said, inclining her head a little.

“Please, sit.” He pulled out a chair for her, pushing it in as she sat down.

River, smiling, took the seat next to Inara.

“River, no,” Inara breathed. “You wait until someone holds out your chair for you.”

“Oh.” She stood up again, and Captain Branscombe laughed.

“Please.” He bowed a little as he did the same for her.

“River was allowed to run a little wild,” Inara said. “And I wasn't around to make sure she learned some of the finer graces.”

“I think your sister is refreshing,” the captain said. “So much nicer than a lot of these old fuddy-duddies,” he added in a whisper.

“I do hope you don’t include me in that,” Inara said, laughing gently.

“My dear, I would never call you a fuddy-duddy.” He smiled into his beard. “Now, can I help you to some wine?”

River watched, her eyes wide, as Inara played the table. It wasn’t obvious, even if you were looking, but the older woman knew exactly how to make people feel at ease, as if she was speaking only to them. It was so subtle, just a look or a gesture, and each man felt she was smiling for him, and each woman believed she could be a friend.

It was like magic. Inara was weaving a spel

Comments
Saturday, 17 March 2007 13:59
So much going on in this chapter and done brilliantly as always.
Saturday, 17 March 2007 18:25
Ya know...I am completely a supporter of the idea that it's a woman's body and she has the say over its operation and maintenance, BUT I really think Hank need to get told. Hank finding out later that she they conceived a child and Zoe aborted it? Hank is not Wash - that I know quite well - but I can imagine that both Hank or Wash would go absolutely fuggin' ballistic about such things. Cuz I think that Joss would support the idea of informed consent for both parties in the conception of child:(

Still...this was utterly fabulous work, Jane0904! Besides the above moment discussed, I especially adored River and Inara's conversation about being more than they think they are, and Mal and Freya's moment discussing all the baggage they have and how it makes them want to run as far away as possible to protect their respective spouse. Joss needs you, my dear;D

BEB
Saturday, 17 March 2007 18:49
Excellent though I do worry with Freya harping on about how Mal would most likely be better off with Inara. Dr Yi needs to get that foolish notion dealt with and out of the way. I really like how their conversation ended with Freya saying they deserved each other and Mal's fervent "God, I hope so". River made me smile, I could so see her acting just like this and the peek into Inara's self doubt was beautifully done and may actually help her. As for Zoe and the baby, I would like to think she would tell Hank before making a decision of such magnitude though appreciate how hard it is for her. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 19 March 2007 04:22
Mal needs to go back to the Doctor. Therapy always makes you feel worse before you get better, that's just the way of it. And he can't run away from his past which is full of so much pain - as Freya pointed out.

I LOVE your description of River at the dance ... I can imagine her completely captivating all the men and just shining like a bright light - and I loved her talk with Inara about who she is now that she's not a companion ... so wise!

I knew Zoe was pregnant ... I know she always wanted children with Wash, but now she has Hank and he obviously worships her ... why doesn't she think he can be a good father? I think it's time for Zoe to realize that her dreams didn't have to die with Wash, just maybe get refashioned ...

Still loving it all!

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