Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Moving in a Non-Linear Fashion (or, Five Conversations Kaylee Frye Never Had About Simon Tam):|Chapter Five: Mal Reynolds|

Saturday, March 17, 2007

Kaylee's never been one to get complicated 'bout her feelings. Now that she is, though, it sure is a good thing the crew of Serenity is around to help. [post BDM angst/genfic/romance/who knows]

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2811    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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V. Love My Captain: Mal Reynolds

Now that she's back at the infirmary door, against her better judgement, Kaylee ain't sure exactly why. She opens the doors and peers into the darkness.

"He ain't even in here," she says under her breath, makin' to turn around. No sense in disturbin' the captain--

"Ain't what?" The voice is hoarse and nearly shocks the skin right off of Kaylee when she steps foot into the med-bay.

Her eyes fall on the bed in the middle of the room, and the injured man lying in it. Her lips tug upwards involuntarily at the expression of sheer frustration lurkin' round the edges of his face.

"Ain't ever gonna get used to bein' in that position, are you, Cap'n?" Kaylee says, fighting a smile.

"Ain't in no standin' to talk positions at all, not with my young, impressionable mechanic," Mal automatically retorts, his eyes gleaming for a second with old humor. Then his expression dims again, and Kaylee's smile softens. So he's not Simon--but maybe it's better that it's Mal she's found instead. She's got a powerful urge to take her Cap'n's advice in this matter, 'specially since he's in no condition to yell at her 'bout shipboard romances right now.

Kaylee may be sweet, but she's got some devious to her, too.

"How ya holdin' up, old man?" she asks gently, coming over and placing her hand on Mal's chest. His heart beats strong and steady, and even though it's a small comfort, it's comfort enough to keep the tears well enough at bay to speak. Kaylee can't help the warm rush of relief that comes at seein' the captain alive and mostly well. His arm's broken and his ribs are fractured, and he's got some sort of strange redness still lurkin' around his facial planes, but he's healin'. And that's what is important, she reckons. There ain't no instant fix out here in space, but he's gettin' there, slowly but surely.

"Old? I may be old, but I still got my good looks, don't I? Please say I do, pretty Kaylee, I'm all aflutter in expectation." His smile is sharp and forced, and Kayl

Comments
Saturday, 17 March 2007 03:59
Awwwwwwwwwwww *turns into a puddle*. I love the Mal/Kaylee big brother kind of interaction.
Saturday, 17 March 2007 03:59
More, please, more. this was wonderful, I love your Kaylee/Mal relationship, you got it just right.
Saturday, 17 March 2007 06:42
You know...this scene was just all kinds of brilliant, biggrstaffbunch. And for the oddest of reasons: Mal's hypocrisy; Mal earnestly lays out to Kaylee the advice of taking what the 'Verse gives you and holding onto it with all of one's strength...when he does the complete opposite when it comest to things like his feelings for Inara. Most people see the attitude of "do as I say and not as I do" as condescending and pointless. But with Mal? It's honest wisdom;D

BEB
Saturday, 17 March 2007 12:59
This kind of writing just makes me angry at Kaylee/Mal shippers. LOOK AT THE BEAUTIFUL RELATIONSHIP THEY HAVE! It's so perfect and you write it SO well. It makes both of them more real somehow. Anyway, this has gotta be my favourite chapter so far... at least until next chapter, which I'm sure I'l love, because, come on... Simon!


update soon :):):)
SUSANAH
Monday, 19 March 2007 02:02
That was charming. It's such a relief to see Mal portrayed as a sane loving big brother/father figure to Kaylee and smart enough to know that Simon is the best thing for her.
Monday, 19 March 2007 14:29
Shiney, 10 outta 10 friend, I feel that you should do one for 'Nara, and possibley... River, towards their own... Doctor as it were ;P cause crew interactions like this are fun, funny, sweet, and very very heartwarming...
Monday, 19 March 2007 15:09
The conversation between the two of them was very good. It's nice to see someone explore their brother/sister relationship as it appeared in the show.

Now - where is the last part?! :)
Monday, 19 March 2007 21:08
Haha the last part is coming, dont worry! And BrownCoat2007, there are four previous parts with four other crew members! Check 'em out!
Sunday, 20 May 2007 20:52
Hey, whatever happened to the last part of this, I was really looking forward to it!

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