Blue Sun Room FICTION - HUMOR

Thwarted Plans

Saturday, April 7, 2007

Kaylee’s hoping her spring cleaning will make a certain reticent doctor more…<b>open</b> to visiting her bunk. Simon, however, has his reasons for staying away.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3541    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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A/N: Hee! Super fun drabble (well, it’s like, eight drabbles in one, but still…pretty short for what I usually write) for the ff_friday community on LJ. Prompt was: exercise. Hope you like!

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There's a time for cleanin' and there's a time for sulkin‘, Kaylee Fryre decides, heaving a sigh as she looks around her bunk. An' right now seems like as good a time as any to get some tidyin' up done.

She bends to pick up an old pair of coveralls, tosses it into the basket near her closet so that the next time they all have some extra soap lyin' around, she can dunk her clothes underwater for a spell. Kaylee's starting to think her clothes are smellin' so bad, no one's wantin' to come near her.

Why else would Simon be avoiding her, after all?

Kaylee frowns and balls up a wrinkled tee-shirt, tosses it into the basket as well. She'd thought things were goin' so well. After that night in the engine room, the way he'd come in and was so adorable, tryin' to help her repair Serenity. And then the sex. The really, really shiny sex. Kaylee smiles wistfully. The heat and the sweat and the hallelujah, finally! of it all...she ain't likely to forget anytime soon. But Simon seems to have forgotten pretty damn well, and in a hurry!

Two weeks had passed, two weeks of him duckin' her and puttin' her off. The one time she'd been forward enough to stick her hand down his pants, he'd actually yelped--yelped like a scared puppy dog!-- and grabbed her hand, tellin' her he was busy.

"Taking care of River," he insists, whenever she asks what he's so busy with. But Kaylee knows it's a load of go se, 'cause more oftentimes than not now, River's more sensical than him, and the girl just looks at her older brother with that long-suffering look in her bottomless eyes.

So why? Why is Simon bound an' determined to not have the lotsa, lotsa sex Kaylee had told him they was gonna have after that first time?

Kaylee sighs and gets to cleaning the floor, thinkin' of all the ways sh

Comments
Saturday, 07 April 2007 10:17
LMAO.
I don't know who I feel more sorry for.
I'm glad Simon has a good reason for being 'inactive', for the first part of the fic I had no idea what was wrong with him.
Great story, will there be a sequel?
Saturday, 07 April 2007 11:33
hahahaha! Oh that's just too funny. Poor Simon.

I think now would be a good time to blame the entire mess on Jayne.

Hope there's gonna be a follow-up?

xxxxxx
Saturday, 07 April 2007 19:26
Lovely, funny.
Saturday, 07 April 2007 19:33
I commented on this over at LJ, but I'll comment here too - we need a sequel. I think it's absolutely hi-larious that Simon would get egged into a game with Jayne and then be so injured that he can't "satisfy" Kaylee.

You have their voices down. Although I do think by this time Simon would had told Kaylee what happened, but maybe not. Still, awesome job!
Sunday, 08 April 2007 21:03
Yeah, I have to think Simon wouldn't have kept it a secret from Kaylee. Maybe for a few days out of embarrassment, but as he saw Kaylee get more and more frustrated, I would think he'd finally have to open up rather than risk upsetting her too badly - and to reassure her that it wasn't something SHE did, or that he was regretting taking that next step.

This was a cute little drabble, though, and you definitely need to write more!
Monday, 09 April 2007 13:22
I have to say that I am amazed that River hasn't blurted it out yet. And Simon really does need to just take Kaylee to one side and tell her. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 13 April 2007 03:20
I dunno...personally, if I was in Simon's situation right then, I too would be avoiding my lady love like the plague till I was a bit more ship-shape. Now, Kaylee will undoubtedly either not believe Simon avoided her due to a pulled groin or think him all kinds of foolish for thinking she would make a fuss over it. Though I agree the crew would give Simon some good-natured heck for getting that badly banged up from playing hoopball;)

BEB

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