This is a sequel to http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=14813> Instruction. Read it first.
Thanks to Kaynara and Tamsibling for the beta.
Yes, yes, I know, I should be posting more of http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=14977> On The Edge but its with a beta at the moment so you'll just have to settle for the below . . :)
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Victory
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Mal strode purposefully down the long hallway, a victorious smile on his face, as he remembered his evening. He narrowly avoided Kaylee, two cups of hot something in her hands, as she no doubt made her way back to Simon’s bunk.
Her cheery smile was a clear indication that the boy had satisfied her well enough, despite his earlier ineptitude, but he shook his head quickly to dislodge those rather disgusting images. In the process, he missed the raised eyebrow and curious stare leveled at his back as he continued to walk.
He had better things to think on and paid his mechanic no mind as the memories of the evening replayed in graphic, intimate detail.
She lay with her cheek pressed against his solid chest breathing heavily. Dark ringlets of hair, matted and damp filled his vision, and he knew that he would welcome death at this moment if it came for him.
“Don’t think this is over, Malcolm Reynolds.” Inara lifted her head, her eyes dancing with amusement and a little bit of annoyance.
He shook his head, unable to quickly follow her sudden attitude change. To his knowledge, he’d done nothing but show her just how much experience he had in removing undergarments and any other clothing in his way. “Wha–?”
She pushed herself up, but not away. A movement that was not lost on Mal. “You did not win our argument.”
Mal raised an amused eyebrow and glanced down at himself, lying naked in her very plush bed, and her, equally as undressed, sprawled atop him. “Might be wantin’ to reconsider that assessment, ‘Nara seein’ as you’re lyin’ here as nake
I thik the idea of River and Kaylee plotting against Simon is unbelievably cruel but also deliciously perfect! And of course, I love the way you write Kaylee - she's so coy and sultry - it's a wonder Simon ever gets anything done!
I love that description. It feels like something out of film noir--I almost expect them to be smoking cigarettes. ;) Very cute story. Simon + Bras = Happy Day in my book.
I'm a little surprised, however, that no on was dressed up as an Indian. ;)
Idiots, the both of 'em *looks around at assembled M/I shippers*. Ummm... Ha ha?
DON'T KILL ME!!! *cowers*. Uh... bye for now... I hope...
-Danny
Love how the whole crew knew.
And Mal and Inara didn't blow nothing, Danny! Their relationship is all about the dance and the move-counter move of interacting with one another. Give them time and they will move on to something else to bicker humorously about;)
BEB
P.S. It took you 2 months and 9 days to write a sequel?!? Damn...TamSibling really is tying up your time;D
BEB
And Mal and Inara didn't blow nothing, Danny! Their relationship is all about the dance and the move-counter move of interacting with one another. Give them time and they will move on to something else to bicker humorously about;)
BEB
P.S. It took you 2 months and 9 days to write a sequel?!? Damn...TamSibling really is tying up your time;D
I love this. Nice to see a bit of M/I and their behaviour afterwards was so typical. Your Simon and Kaylee scene was sooo cute and funny. I love the way you write Simon because many writers (mysellf included, I'm sure) fall into the trap of having him suddenly become all smooth and everything once he and Kaylee hook up.
And yeah, bring on the next chapter of On The Edge... PLEASE!!!
Hot Damn!
I'll be in my bunk, lol!!
great work as always!
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