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Communication - Part VIII

Friday, March 16, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Back to the plot. Inara contacts Serenity, and Mal and Freya have a little chat ... quite close to the airlock. Please leave feedback!

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Inara closed the door and turned to the girl. “What the tyen shiao duh are you doing here?”

“Helping.” River walked around the room, running her fingers over the expensive furnishings.

“Helping. How, exactly?” Inara was angry now. “This is nothing to do with you.”

“You’re going to find your son.” River stopped and fixed her with a stern eye. “You should have told Mal. Face to face.”

“He’s in the middle of … and it’s nothing to do with him either.”

“He’s your friend.”

“He’s got enough to worry about.”

“And now he’s worrying about you.”

Inara glanced at her then dropped onto the sofa, exhaling noisily. “River, I have to do this.”

“I understand. But you don’t have to do it alone.” River joined her, taking her hand. “It isn’t safe.”

Inara looked at her sharply. “Safe? How is it not safe?”

“I don’t know yet.”

“Sometimes …”

“I know,” River said airily. “Everyone feels like that about me occasionally.”

“Don’t you care?”

The girl laughed. “It’s much more fun to keep people guessing.”

“But running off and not telling anyone …”

“Exactly.”

Inara glared at her. “Did you tell them where I was going?” she asked, not wanting to admit she had done anything in the least bit foolish.

“No. That’s up to you.”

“And how did you –“

River put her head on one side. “You were very loud. And you promised to help me get ready for dinner with Jethro. And I don’t have a dress to wear.” She sighed. “He is not going to be pleased we’ve had to put this off another day.”

“That’s nothing to do with me!”

“No?”

“Oh, River.” Inara sounded so exasperated that the young psychic smiled. “And don’t look so happy about it. I can only imagine what your brother’s going to say when he hears about this.” She glanced towards the Cortex link and sighed loudly. “Well, I suppose I’d better let them know you’re not floating around some moon somewhere.”

“Captain Branscombe wouldn’t have done that.”

“No, but I might.”

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“… so it looks like River

Comments
Friday, 16 March 2007 18:26
Loved River in this but Frey is right, Inara is old enough to make her own decisions but I also agree with Mal that she isn't exactly as able to look out for herself as Jayne in the Big Bad 'Verse. I hope Frey gets over that green eyed goddess long enough to put her trust in what she has got. And Simon's reactions, so accurate it made me smile. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 16 March 2007 22:18
Good ol' River - causing trouble! I just love her. I agree that Inara is old enough and adult enough to make her own decisions and go where she wants and with who, but I am a mite worried that this is all going to end badly.

I really loved the end of the Mal/Freya bit - So is that .... No. ... Is it ... no. That was priceless!

And isn't it two-bite Friday? I'm hungry!
Friday, 16 March 2007 23:04
Hmm...a rather spirited debate topic, I must admit. Inara IS old enough and of sound mind, so her decision to find her son should be respected; however, she is still not quite to old-hand level when it comes to dealing with all the various scum buckets inhabiiting the 'Verse and I get the feeling that more than a few will arise to affect Inara's search;)

Still...a brilliantly written chapter here, Jane0904! Definitely could imagine Mal and Freya (well...whoever would have gotten tapped to be Freya had Joss & co done an eerily similar idea if the BDS had been allowed to run for several years) having this kind of debate. Get the feeling though that Freya will have some choice words for Inara about how she still can get Mal to come running when she beckons:(

BEB
Saturday, 17 March 2007 10:02
It\'s funny - Inara went by herself because it was her journey and she didn\'t want give the crew more problems. Now it\'s the opposite because River wanted to butt in. Now again everything is Inara\'s fault. I know River followed out of concern but if I were Inara I would get as far far away from Serenity as possible.

Still, it makes a great story and as usual I\'m hooked :)

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