Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Moving in a Non-Linear Fashion (or, Five Conversations Kaylee Frye Never Had About Simon Tam): |Chapter Four-Zoe Washbourne|

Friday, March 16, 2007

Kaylee's never been one to get complicated 'bout her feelings. Now that she is, though, it sure is a good thing the crew of Serenity is around to help. [post BDM angst/genfic/romance/who knows]

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IV. Take to the Sky: Zoe Washbourne

Once Kaylee is done giggling with Inara, the Companion prods her gently to go find Simon. Kaylee nods, giving Inara one last hug before getting up and heading back towards the infirmary. She traces her hands across the ship's surface as she walks, feeling the heat against her skin. These are nights she lives for, she decides, bein' alone for moments at a time with her family, communin' with Serenity. There ain't much else she could ask for.

Much else, but there're still things she wants. Things she could have if she could just reach out and grab 'em.

When she gets to the infirmary door, she takes a deep breath before preparing to step through. A voice behind her stops her.

"He ain't in there."

Kaylee turns, her eyes wide. Now who? she thinks desperately. Just when she's gettin' up the courage...

It's Zoe, and Kaylee's heart stops for a moment, pure, involuntary grief enveloping her at the sight of the ship's first mate. There are circles around Zoe's eyes and her shoulders are stooped farther than they usually are, but Zoe attempts to smile at Kaylee, and the weak effort makes Kaylee's heart break a little.

"Simon," Zoe elaborates. "The doc? He ain't in there." She furrows her brow. "Kaylee? That who you're looking for?"

Kaylee guesses Zoe wouldn't take it so well if she just up and gave her a big ol' hug, so she don't. But it's a near, near thing.

"Yeah," Kaylee nods slowly. "I, uh, how d'ya know he ain't in there?"

Zoe smiles again, that half-lift of her lips and the drowsy, sad tilt of her head. "Couldn't sleep. Came down here to see if the doc had anything to help, but it's all dark in there. Think the Cap'n's restin' after his fall today."

Kaylee sighs. Now why hadn't she thought about that? She shoulda looked in the window right off, but she'd been so preoccupied with the darn door--Kaylee sighs again. She had been so close.

"Why?" Zoe's smile is a little brighter than it was before. Still plenty dim, but the

Comments
SUSANAH
Friday, 16 March 2007 04:11
Go Zoe! I always knew she was strong but not how many ways.
Friday, 16 March 2007 04:49
Aw... you made me go all teary-eyed a little. You write Zoe well, too.
Friday, 16 March 2007 09:38
Zoe is so hard to write... and you nailed it. Well done. This chapter was perfect. :)

xxxx
Friday, 16 March 2007 12:03
I cried so very, very hard at this...
Friday, 16 March 2007 14:55
Oh, nicely done with Zoe. You write her very well and she's not someone who is easy to write.

So - Kaylee's next convo is with the Captain, huh? The man against shipboard relationships. . . oh that will be fun!
Friday, 16 March 2007 22:20
Leaving the really fun conversation till last, eh biggrstaffbunch? Definitely can't wait to see what Mal and Kaylee talk about concerning relationships;D

Really gotta give you props for what you wrote here because like it's been said, Zoe's a tough nut to crack. Finding the right balance of solid and squishy is a difficult thing, especially in a post-BDM setting. I am glad thought that Zoe is promoting relationships and encouraging Kaylee to try something with Simon...even if it might hurt to see others get a chance at stuff that she and Wash never will:(

BEB

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