Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Moving in a Non-Linear Fashion (or, Five Conversations Kaylee Frye Never Had About Simon Tam): |Chapter Three- Inara Serra|

Thursday, March 15, 2007

Kaylee's never been one to get complicated 'bout her feelings. Now that she is, though, it sure is a good thing the crew of Serenity is around to help. [post BDM angst/genfic/romance/who knows]

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III. Playing For Keeps: Inara Serra

"I never would have thought that Jayne had much of a story to tell. Silly of me, don't you think?"

Kaylee whirls around, spooked. Sure are a lot of people up for it bein' so late at night, she thinks, and ordinarily, she'd have been overjoyed at someone to sit and chat with. Right now, though, Kaylee ain't sure she's fit for human company, her bein' so down in the dumps as she is.

But it's Inara, and Kaylee can't help but always be happy to see her. 'Sides, it looks like she could use a friend. The small smile on Inara's face is gentle and serene, but Kaylee knows better than to think Inara's okay. They all heard the wave that Inara's House Priestess sent not two days ago, tellin' her in no uncertain terms that perhaps freedom out in the black was the best option for her after all.

Especially, the Priestess had added, if falling in with criminals who levelled unjust accusations at the government who sponsers and protects the Guild was Inara's choice of--

Well, Kaylee's not sure how the Preistess's sentence ended. Inara had ended the wave abruptly, and refused to speak a word 'bout it, afterwards. In fact, she's taken to muttering unladylike things under her breath whenever anyone mentions her clients--specifically that there ain't any. 'Nara's shuttle's been empty of late, and Kaylee knows that's a mix of both Inara's own wishes and the Guild stickin' their hooty-tooty noses in Inara's business. Kaylee is impressed with how well Inara's takin' it, on the outside at least. She suspects the few times she's seen Mal talkin' to Inara in real quiet tones and all close-like have somethin' to do with that.

But Kaylee also suspects it'll be a long, long while till Inara knows how to be anything other than a House Madrassa Companion, and she's happy to entertain the older woman any way she can till then, if that's what long walks 'round Serenity in the dead of the night call for.

'Sides, it ain't like Kaylee don't know what it'

Comments
Thursday, 15 March 2007 11:17
I LOVE this.

Really good insight into Inara, and Kaylee's musings near the begining were wonderful too.

I personally think Inara should lock her and Simon in the infirmary and refuse to let them out until they're snogging.

But that's just me ;)
Thursday, 15 March 2007 15:03
Hmm, I'm a bit confused. Wasn't Kaylee right at the infirmary door after her conversation with Jayne? She and Inara didn't move right away. If Simon is in there, did he not hear anything?

Her conversation with Inara was ok. A little character building. The end, since this is about Kaylee in the first place, and how she's going to deal with these new feelings, was the best part. That she came to that end revelation by talking to Inara was, I assume, the point?
SUSANAH
Thursday, 15 March 2007 16:25
I love it. Cool insights into Inara. When Kaylee finally get through with Simon, Inara should talk to him about adjusting to a different life style. He's just spent 8 months on that project.
Thursday, 15 March 2007 16:51
Really good fic series. Keep going!
Thursday, 15 March 2007 16:52
Hehe...I know this is where people start to get antsy. Just for y'all's info...this fic is mainly a character-study...so each chapter is Kaylee with another member of the crew. Simon is last...so while he and she are MENTIONED in each chapter, he doesn't show up till the end. But it'll be a really, really good payoff. :)

Also, Leiasky, the whole infirmary thing will be explained. I can tell you're getting impatient ;) so I'm working on a S/K one-shot just for you...no lie. Just you wait!
Thursday, 15 March 2007 18:03
Awww, a nice S/K one shot just for me? I'm sure there will be a lot of people very happy to hear that, me included!

Good to know the infirmaty thing will be explained because I'm all manner of confused about it:)
Friday, 16 March 2007 00:11
And another brilliantly written bit of character exposition has arrived care of biggrstaffbunch! Excellent!

;D

Definitely loved how this chapter was structured and handled, BSB! Since Inara and Kaylee are so close to one another, the shorter length fits better since they can get down to their deeper feelings easier with one another. That and I like how you've given Inara just the right amount of aimlessness and confusion about the Guild basically chucking her aside with her usual tenacity and drive when it comes to dealing with her post-BDM life;D

BEB
Friday, 16 March 2007 01:55
You have such a realistic portrayal of the crew post Miranda, biggrstaffbunch.

Sad for Inara...but I can't imagine a brighter outlook for her and the Guild.
Their going to want her back only on their terms to make an example of her to her students of what happens to wayward little Companions. You've conveyed that well here.

Like what you're doing with K/S and how determined Kaylee is.

Looking forward to where this goes.
Friday, 16 March 2007 03:28
I really liked this convo as well. I think it makes sense that Kaylee would look to Inara for help, but it makes even more sense that Inara would have to admit she's not sure she's the best person to offer council. Which is great!

I am eagerly anticipating the S/K payoff and the one-shot! So glad to hear those are coming ... but I also can't wait to see who gives Kaylee the final push to go talk to Simon ... My money's on Zoe!
Friday, 16 March 2007 04:41
Of the ones I've read so far, this one feels the most natural, the most in-character. I would trust you to write for Inara if there was ever the opportunity for you to work with a sequel or something like it. Hope that made sense. :)

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