Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Communication - Part III

Thursday, March 8, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. More plot, a little angst. Freya and Mal get counselled, and Kaylee does some research of her own ... If you read and like or loathe it, please let me know! Also if you think this is working ... And thanks!

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“How was it?” Mal asked, getting to his feet as the door opened and Freya hobbled out.

“Fine,” she said.

“Really.” He looked into her eyes. “You wanna try that with a little more conviction? ‘Cause you’re as pale as a sheet right now.”

“It was … difficult,” she admitted, letting him help her to a chair and sit down. “I … things …” She stumbled to a halt.

“I understand, ai ren ,” he said softly, squatting down next to her. “That’s why we’re here.”

“Mr Reynolds?” Dr Yi stood in the doorway. “If you’re ready?”

Mal got to his feet. “Always,” he said, smiling charmingly. He followed the diminutive doctor.

“Good luck,” Freya called, stretching her legs out as far as possible and putting her head back on the chair.

Don’t need luck, Mal thought to himself as he entered the office. Just a strong will. He looked around. And something to stop the feeling that he was out of his depth.

“Please, sit down,” Dr Yi said, indicating the chair opposite.

“Darn it, you mean I don’t get to lie on the couch?” he asked, tucking his thumbs into his suspenders.

“If you’d like to.”

He grinned. “No, just joshing with you, doc. This here’ll be fine.” He sat down in the chair and leaned back, lifting the front legs off the ground.

Dr Yi gazed at him. “Comfortable?” she asked.

“Surely am.”

“Mr Reynolds –“

“Captain. It’s Captain Reynolds. Got me a sweet little ride of a boat, just parked out near here. Little darlin’ she is too.”

“Captain. My apologies. And may I ask …” Dr Yi didn’t blink her violet eyes. “… are we going to be having this shit-kicker persona for the whole hour?”

Mal’s eyebrow went up. “Is that what I'm doing?”

“Mr … Captain Reynolds, I promise you, I am not going to hurt you.”

“I never considered the possibility that you were.”

“No?”

Mal reassessed the woman in front of him, and realised he had been mistaken. There was steel inside that small frame.

“Please accept my apologies,” he said, setting the chair back down. “It’s … it w

Comments
Thursday, 08 March 2007 09:12
Oh captain, my captain ... Mal, how do I love thee? Let me count the ways ...

Mal is so noble, at times it almost seems like a fault, but then we remember it's why we love him.

I'm glad Kaylee found out more information, but man is Simon in for an earful when he gets back ... I'm a bit worried about them and him in particular ... Hopefully, he didn't ignore some important facts just because he's so in love with Kaylee - although that is pretty much noble as a grape.

And what about poor Jethro? We didn't see him in this little snippet - I'm sure River will tell him she doesn't need anything fancy or special, just him.

Can't wait for more!
Thursday, 08 March 2007 12:33
Adored this. I love that we finally got to hear the conversation Freya had with Dr Yi and I loved how Mal explained why he gave the piece of *goushi buru hundan* that hurt Freya a quick death with a bullet between the eyes rather than what he would once have done. Love how much they love each other and I'm thinking these sessions with Dr Yi will help them in ways nothing else could. I also am really pleased that Kaylee can now see beyond her blinkered obssession with having more children that Simon is doing what he is doing because he honestly thinks its' the one thing that will make her truly happy. Having more kids isn't the be-all and end-all of everything, tons of folks can't have even one child and being in a loving relationship is another blessing no amount of coin can buy you. I think this lesson has sunk in now and look forward to Kaylee and Simon talking it out and hopefully weaning Simon off this very scary treatment. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 08 March 2007 20:34
I can only feel pure and unaltered love for what you're doing here, Jane0904! Between getting a glimpse at Freya's emotional dams breaking while talking about what Wing's men did to her, and Mal's admission of wanting to expound righteous fury on the scrofulous pricks who dared touch his wife...I was awed at the brilliance and perfection of all the voices involved:D

But I can't leave the Kaylee/Zoe moment alone either. It takes amazing skill to write Kaylee as being furious. Not offended or upset or irritated...pure fury at both Simon for seemingly putting his health in jeopardy to grant Kaylee a wish that might never come true and her own self for pushing Simon to make such a decision without properly consulting with her. It's especially telling that Kaylee would actually damage a piece of important equipment in her ire....

BEB
Friday, 09 March 2007 01:53
Wonderful piece of writing in this one! Loved Mal's honesty and bluntness - so true to character.

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