Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Tranquillity - Part V

Wednesday, March 7, 2007

Jobless and soon to be on the drift, accepting Inara's charity turns out to be the least of Mal's problems...

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1402    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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From the air, New Dunsmuir's ship-yards are a bustling hive of activity. Teams of engineers are working at cross-purposes, sparks flying, and ship-parts going every which way and never where they're supposed to be. Serenity flies over the hurly-burly in a lazy arc, searching for the specified landing site.

Kaylee stands, facing the cargo-bay door as Wash pilots Serenity into dry-dock with barely a bump. Her radiant smile is replaced with as surly a scowl a girl as full of sunshine as she is can muster. Mal winces his way over to her, walking still more painful than it should be, and puts a reassuring hand on her shoulder.

“Kaylee, put the wrench down. You look like you're going to beat the brains out of the first mechanic through that door. They ain't going to do anything to my boat we ain't comfortable with.”

“I know Cap'n,” she replies, turning anxious eyes to him, “But... I just don't like the thought of strangers messin' with her.”

Jayne and Zoe are clonking their way down the stairs and Mal's response is lost as the doors open, revealing a team of three men in filthy orange overalls. The tallest of them steps forwards, arms raised. They deal with suspicious crews on a daily basis and are expecting the frisking for weapons. Zoe steps forward, patting him down carefully, whilst Jayne does the same to the man's companions. She nods to Mal.

“They're okay,” Jayne growls, eyeing them from under his brows.

The chief engineer smiles. “We're just here to do our job, folks, same as you. You want to escort us to the engine room?”

“Jayne, Kaylee,” Mal responds, “Show 'em the way.”

The Chief smiles at Kaylee as they leave the cargo bay. “Firefly class, Aught Three. She's a great boat.”

Kaylee doesn't respond, though her frown is disappearing, her inevitable cheeriness beginning to break through the bad-mood.

One of the other men lets out a long whistle when once they reach the engine. “That's some fine wiring you got there,” he says, something like admiration in his voice.

Jayne rolls his eyes a

Comments
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 18:10
>>She nods and for a moment Mal can see her as just an ordinary girl. “They're coming,” she says, “I have to be ready for them. Bright and white. They smile, then they bite.”

Perhaps not, he thinks.<<

Uh-oh. I love how you wrote that- River turning on a dime like that. She seems fine one moment, then she's saying disturbing things the next. Well done!
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 23:21
Poor Kaylee, there are strangers messin' with Serenity.

Who's smilin' and biting? I want to know!!
Thursday, 08 March 2007 06:13
Yeah...not surprised Kaylee got won over by the new parts and compliments;D

And I am definitely starting to get anxious for the other shoe to drop. River's little preminition and the whole job setup? Not making with the warm and fuzzies:(

BEB
Thursday, 08 March 2007 11:23
I really REALLY hope that those three seemingly pleasant engineers didn't get any time on their own with Serenity's engine. Also, I am kind of fearful of what River sees and why she is not able to tell the crew or give them some kind of warning. You would think if this job is the wrong thing for them to be doing she would be telling them but it is vague and creepifyingly disturbing which in itself is pure River. Just wish she made a bit more sense when it looks like they are going to need some kind of help. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 29 March 2007 22:50
Seems to me something just isn't on the up and up with all of this. Too much money and pretty being flashed in their faces. Just makes you wonder how deep in go se they are going to be in.

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