Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Tranquillity - Part IV

Wednesday, March 7, 2007

Jobless and soon to be on the drift, accepting Inara's charity turns out to be the least of Mal's problems...

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The dust cakes her boots as she strides down the street, just outside the main docklands area of New Dunsmuir. There's less bustle here; fewer tourists but plenty of nondescript company uniforms. Most of the buildings here are warehouses of one sort or another and the people who pass who are on their way to or from shifts, quietly absorbed in their own comings and goings.

Units 9-11 unsurprisingly turn out to be a boxy grey building, absolutely nothing to distinguish it from all the others in this part of town. There's a door, brightly painted under a layer of the clinging yellowish dust. It bears a discreet plaque, telling her she's at the right address.

She's tempted to head round the back, to the big bay doors. Assuming this offer is on the level, there'd be the business of loading and unloading going on. She could slip in relatively unnoticed, get the feel of the place...

Legitimate business enterprise, she reminds herself. Tax-payers and everything, all legit. Even got its own small and typically clichéd article on the cortex. Wymann Inc, Transport Solutions – “We Get It Done.” Probably not going to be too impressed with a crew-member who takes it on her own initiative to spy out their operation. No Jayne, no (visible) guns, no sneaking around – on Inara's request.

Zoe steels herself - You trust Inara, don't you? - and presses the intercom button next to the dusty blue door.

Wymann Industries,” says a slightly bored female voice.

“Captain Reynolds,” she replies, “Here to see a Bill Wymann.”

One moment.

The door is opened by a slight girl with mousey hair, dressed neatly in a blue suit. “Please come in, Captain Reynolds,” she says, and it's the same voice that spoke over the intercom. Zoe follows her inside.

To her surprise, she finds herself in what it obviously a waiting room. Blue chairs line the cream walls, several of them occupied. A receptionist's station occupies most of the central space, three more girls sitting behind screens. There's a look about most o

Comments
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 18:03
Oh dear. Mal raises some very valid points. What in the 'verse are they going to have to transport? And Reavers? This is making me nervous... Can't wait to find out!
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 23:19
Eeek! Reavers make me scared. Je n'aime pas. (yes I know that's bad grammer)
Thursday, 08 March 2007 06:09
Damn...that sounds like a lot of money. But I gotta agree with Mal: they got tapped cuz they need an...independent contractor who isn't afraid to skirt the law and who can handle sticky situations. Though I am kinda surprised Mal thinks Kaylee will be upset that Serenity's getting some upgrades. Though I imagine needing to cooperate with Wymann Transport engineers would dampen her enthusiasm:)

Well...another brilliant chapter here, captainvimes! Keep it up:)

BEB
Thursday, 08 March 2007 11:13
I don't think it's the upgrades themselves that will upset Kaylee but the strangers crawling over her engine to get it that will light her blue touch paper. I'm with Mal and Zoe on this one, don't like the sound of the job even if it does come from Inara's *friend*. Also, I liked that when Zoe went to check the place out she pauses and asks herself if she trusts Inara as if that question should never be in doubt yet there is that faint doubt there. Was Inara passing the job on as a genuine wish to help the crew out of a bad spot or was he under duress to get them involved and do the job? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 08 March 2007 11:14
That should be she not he in the last line. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 29 March 2007 22:45
Anything with the Alliance is bound to make anyone a might tetchy.

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