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Tranquillity - Part I

Wednesday, March 7, 2007

Jobless and soon to be on the drift, accepting Inara's charity turns out to be the least of Mal's problems...

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Wash glances away as the needle sinks into his arm, looking instead at the unconscious Mal. The Captain looks pale and feverish, drying blood still crusted on his face. “Is he going to be okay?” he asks Simon quietly.

The doctor thinks for a moment, then nods cautiously. “He's lost a lot of blood, but he's stable enough for now. The transfusion should help.”

“Sometimes I think he only employs me as a walking blood-bank for when he gets in the way of a bullet,” Wash says, eyes now drifting to the swelling blood pack.

“Yes, this is the... second time?”

“Since you've been here,” Wash clarifies, “Fifth in total.”

“I'm... sure he'd do the same for you,” Simon offers, obviously not looking for conversation.

Wash sighs. It's not that he's scared of needles, but he prefers someone to talk to when there's one stuck in his arm for several minutes, to take his mind off things.

As if on cue, Zoe appears. For a moment she only has anxious eyes for her Captain, but then she meets her husband's gaze and her expression softens. She sits beside Wash on the other bed, reassuring hand on his shoulder. She knows his dislike of needles and casts around for a topic of conversation to distract him with.

“We still headed for Beaumonde?” she asks, even though she already knows the answer.

“Yep,” her husband replies, “Should hit atmo in about eighteen hours,” He hesitates for a moment. “Doesn't seem much point hitting a delivery we've got no cargo for,” he adds.

Zoe nods. “But there'll be other jobs there, with luck.”

Jobs for a crew known for not hitting their cargo?

The words remain unspoken, but Wash's expression says them as clearly as his mouth could. The blood-pack is bulging now, and Simon deftly removes the needle from Wash's arm.

“I'll get on the cortex,” the pilot states, standing carefully lest he should go light-headed, “See what I can find.” He touches a gentle thumb to Zoe's cheek, “You need sleep too,” he adds softly, “Don't stay up all night watching him dream, he won't thank you f

Comments
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 17:25
That was perfect! An absolutely perfect description of that moment we all wonder about: Mal loosing his faith, why someone once so rooted in the land would choose the black. I'm really excited about this. This is gonna be great, I can tell!
Thursday, 08 March 2007 00:48
This is very well written. You hooked me right away, and you held me with your skill at imagery and your ability to put the right words together just so. I especially liked the flashback--it's very strong and effective. Keep it up!
Thursday, 08 March 2007 05:52
Damn...that was mighty powerful stuff, captainvimes! Especially loved how you had Mal explore his philosophical shift from basically worshiping the land to wanting to wander the Black;

BEB
Thursday, 08 March 2007 10:47
Excellent. Loved the whole piece, Wash talking while he gives blood to his injured Captain, Zoe knowing why he needs to, Book and Kaylee wanting to spend some time in the infirmary. Then the dreaming, the remembering, the reliving the reason Mal clings to the Black. How everything he treasured of family and home had been destroyed by the Alliance and how he now looks to the sky. He may have lost his faith in God but he places it now in his crew and I think that's a mighty fine place. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 24 March 2007 17:24
oh wow, I'm backtracking, I like to read series straight through from the beginning, and I must say, this is gunna be gorram GOOD!!! I agree whole heartedly with BEB and EX, this is amasing imagery, and it's showing us how Mal finnaly lost ALL faith, I SWEAR my hand to God, that Joss would have probably done something like this in the series, your that damn good!
Thursday, 29 March 2007 22:04
Beautiful and poignant. Good backstory for Shadow.

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