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He Never Left Serenity

Wednesday, March 7, 2007

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1386    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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He Never Left Serenity

The warm summer sun invited my brother and me outside to play. It had been a long and harsh winter on Haven and we had been climbing the walls in boredom. After grabbing our water bottles and promising not to go far, we ran into the thick vegetation surrounded the settlement.

We arrived on Haven last summer, but there was too much work to be done before winter to really explore. So today, we were determined to make the most of the warm weather. We tripped along, not really speaking much. Occasionally, one of us would find a scrap of metal or a broken bucket, the only signs of the last settlement. Rumor was that the former Alliance command ordered the settlement destroyed in retaliation for harboring known fugitives.

Further into the brush, I stumbled over what looked like the remains of a book.

“Hey Charlie! Come look at this.” We both studied the book and determined that it was a Bible. “It must have been out here forever.” I said. “Look how many of the pages are missing.” I put the book back where I found it and we kept going.

Charlie plowed on ahead of me, while I lingered back, wondering about the Bible. It had looked like only certain passages had been removed and there were faint blood stains on the cover.

“Cindy!” Charlie loud exclamation broke through my thoughts. I ran the few paces toward his voice and crashed through a wall of vines. The sight that met me took my breath away.

“A ship, an old ship. From the look of it, I’d say its an old Firefly. They stopped making these like a hundred years ago!” Charlie could barely contain himself as he raced towards the ship.

“Charlie! Stop! It might not be safe!” I called out as I followed suit.

“The hull looks intact. Look, you can even still make out the name sort of. It says Serendipity or something.” He said pointing to the design on the side of the ship.

“That says Serenity.” I corrected him, rolling my eyes. “We should start heading home.”

“Oh come on Cindy. It won’t hurt anythin

Comments
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 15:58
That was very sad, and short but nicely done.
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 16:08
a fitting end for Mal, if he has to...
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 17:22
I think this may be my favorite Mal's end fic EVAR!
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 18:22
Aww! That was sad, but well done. But it makes me wonder about the events that led up to that. And where's the rest of the crew? Questions, questions.
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 19:05
oh that's really sad.

But very good.

Jennifer
-x-
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 23:48
This was an unusual take on Mal not leaving Serenity, usually you think of the Battle of Serenity and him carrrying it with him wherever he goes in the 'verse like a cross on his back. It was also very sad because the lack of other mortal remains seems to indicate when he landed Serenity on Haven he was alone as if the rest of the crew had either left him or been killed along the way and he was heading back to Haven perhaps to join Wash and Book. My favourite scenario is the Captain not dying at all. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 08 March 2007 00:15
I really like this.

I like the real feel of the story and the perspective, a retrospective on old remains found in an old ship (although I personally would have put more age on it say 200+ years).

Reminds me a bit of Ozymandias, the average man's version.

Here I am. Here is my ship. That is who I am. Now forgotten.

I saw you are making this into a series - I hope you leave the questions unanswered. I think that the:
"Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away."
Is the heart of what makes this memorable and distinct.
Thursday, 08 March 2007 01:54
Whoa.
Shiny (It may be dead in six hundred years, but til then I use it!!!)
I can see Mal goin' similar ta this- but, he don't strike me as one to give up and die. Or else, he really never woulda left Serenity.

-Danny
Thursday, 08 March 2007 05:29
Damn...all the possible scenarios for why Mal should be alone on Serenity's last voyage are probably leagues more powerful and painful than what "really" happened here. Can't imagine the rest of the crew leaving Mal to his own devices unless something happened to push him back into the darkness again:(

Still...brilliant bit of work here, Serena81!

BEB
Thursday, 08 March 2007 07:06
:o

That would have scared the crap out of me!

Poor Cap'n Bones. :(

(Nice work.)

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