Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Communication - Part II

Wednesday, March 7, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal and Freya head off to the counsellor, while the rest of the gang do their various things ... mostly light plot, some angst. Try it out - you might like it!

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Inara brought the shuttle into a landing on the small pad, then shut the engine down. Still gripping the control column, she tried to slow her breathing. She felt so close, as if the entire future path of her life was about to be decided.

She pushed her hair out of her face and noticed her hand was shaking.

“Come on,” she said to herself. “You’re a … well, an ex-Companion. You should be better than this.”

Closing her eyes she summoned all her resources, and when she looked out again at Ariel City, she was Inara Serra again.

“Time to go.”

---

“Hank?” Kaylee looked into the bridge.

“Oh, hey,” the pilot said, smiling broadly. “Thought you were going to the park?”

“I am. I was. I’m going back … Just something I need to do first.” Kaylee smiled somewhat furtively.

“You gotta secret?” he asked. “I’m good at keeping secrets if you want to talk about it.”

“No, I just … is the Cortex link in shuttle two working?”

“Sure. Last I looked. Why?”

“Something I need to look up.”

“Couldn’t you do that from here?”

“No, it’s … it’s a surprise.”

Hank looked at her. Kaylee was really the worst liar in the ‘verse, but he took pity on her. “Okay. I’ll make sure the link is up by the time you get there.” He looked behind her. “Where’s Bethany?”

“With River. They’re watching the ducks.”

“So there are actually ducks?”

“Thanks, Hank,” Kaylee said distractedly, hurrying off towards the shuttle.

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“You were no help,” Mal complained as he walked beside Freya.

“Was I supposed to be?”

“They could get into a hell of a lot of trouble on this planet.”

“And you think they’d be speaking to you back on board if you didn’t let them go?”

“Be quiet, though.”

Freya smiled. “Now you know you hate it when they do that.”

“Maybe. But that don’t excuse you not backing me up. I am captain, you know.”

“And you do it so well.” They walked slowly along in companionable silence for a minute or two before Freya spoke again. “We could have waited, you know. For

Comments
Wednesday, 07 March 2007 18:06
Oh, poor Jethro ... although River had to have known that something wasn't going to go right ... but still, I feel awful for the guy - he was just trying to make it special ...

Very interesting bit with Mal and Freya and her suspicion of the doctor - I loved the fact that Hank was sweeping the office for listening devices.

And what precisely is Kaylee up to? That girl can cause all manner of mischief ... can't wait for more!
Thursday, 08 March 2007 00:13
I was surprised that Freya was so suspicious of Dr Yi but glad she checked out, or appeared to. Not sure I trust that doc yet. As for Inara's search for her son I have a sneaky suspicion about that. Be interesting to see if you go down that road. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 08 March 2007 04:58
It's always interesting to witness "Jethro" moments, because - at least for me - I keep expecting him to have Book-like hidden talents that would allow him to be better prepared for things. The scene at the restaurant really brings home how truly honest your portrayal of him is...noble, naive and nutless (slightly;D).

That and I love the idea of Freya and Hank running a tag team bug sweep of the psych counsellor's office. Definitely something I could imagine the crew getting up to to protect their interests;D

BEB
KITTYKAT26
Friday, 09 March 2007 05:36
Anyone else think that Jayne is the man that bumped into Jethro and lifted his wallet? If I'm right, LOL! It's my personal opinion that Jayne is a genius!

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