Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Aftermath - Part VI

Thursday, March 1, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Freya's retreating into the darkness, and things are coming to a head. A long section, but it fits together. Please let me know what you think, as I'm struggling with the final parts.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3508    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Elena sat in her class and grinned. This was so good. So much to learn. So many things to make her day bright. And a friend to talk to, someone who understood, who enjoyed it all as much as she did. She glanced across the room towards Freya, her blonde head intent on the book on her desk. Then she looked across, and they both smiled. They always did know what the other was thinking.

The teacher rapped her pen on the desk. “Elena Rostov, you are supposed to be working.”

“I've finished,” she said, holding up her book.

“Then bring it to me.”

Elena got up, aware of all her fellow classmates eyes on her as she walked to the front. She handed the book over. “It was easy,” she said quietly.

“I see.” The teacher thumbed through the exercises. “And so it appears to be.” She handed the book back. “Then for the rest of the lesson I think you should go onto chapter eight. See if that is a little more taxing.”

“Yes, Madam Fong.” As she headed back to her desk her heart soared. She’d never felt like this before, so jing cai, and to be amongst others just the same … She sat back down and called up chapter eight. Oh, this was so much fun …

The teacher watched her for a moment, the girl’s pen hurtling across the page as she solved one problem after another. Then she brought up the class roster on her screen, delicately tapping in a command code, waiting until a blue light appeared next to Elena Rostov’s name …

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“Mal?”

Serenity’s captain was sitting in the pilot’s chair, staring out into the black, and didn’t turn as Inara stepped onto the bridge. “Couldn’t sleep?” he asked.

“I was thinking.” Inara sat down in the other seat.

“Yeah. I find myself doing that a lot, this time of night. When I'm wakeful.”

“And when was the last time you got more than a couple of hours sleep?” she asked.

He dropped his head slightly. “Probably a while.”

“Try since Freya was kidnapped.”

He looked back out at the stars. “Reckon you might be right.”

“Why aren’t you with

Comments
Thursday, 01 March 2007 10:21
I was really pleased to you at last starting to address the issue of Mal not being able to carry his wife and do for her. I have a feeling you are going to drag Freya's descent into darkness out until every single one on board the ship is about ready to give up on living. Interesting the way Freya uses her ability to lash out through the crew, why oh why didn't Jethro stop Simon sedating her? River warned she must not be allowed to sleep but does anyone listen? Let's hope it's not to late to draw her back from the raggedy edge. Have to say I am more than ready for some GOOD news for a change. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 01 March 2007 10:24
That was brilliant! I love this!

PLEASE! GIVE ME MORE!! I am addicted! Please!

I am the Fan-fic-Freya-in-mucho-pain Cookie Monster!

Keep up the brilliant work! X)
Thursday, 01 March 2007 17:47
Amazing! I love the idea of Freya's emotions spiraling out of control and affecting all the other members of the crew. That's just incredible. My stomach was churning during Simon and Kaylee's argument, only because it did have a few kernels of truth in there.

I hope you can see this through, even though the ending is coming hard. If you need help, PM me, I'd be happy to pass around some plot bunnies!
Thursday, 01 March 2007 17:55
Oh...now this is just the utter shizney, Jane0904! The level of dread that built up as we got to see more and more of Freya's memories from the Academy and the crew's actions concerning Freya's condition...so thick and seductive:(

Gotta wonder why Mal wasn't affected though by Freya's emotional projection. And where Inara was in all this...cuz having the majority of the crew try and do serious harm or death to one another, feeding on all the pain and negative emotions they have trapped inside of them that's been released, is completely disturbing!

BEB

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