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Moving On (Aftermath - Part 2)

Monday, June 2, 2003

This follows Aftermath, which followed Heart of Gold.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3043    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer - The playground still belongs to Mr. Whedon, etc. I thoroughly enjoy visiting.

This is a continuation. Apologies for the delay in getting it up. The next part is mostly written in my head and I just need to type faster. Please be patient. I have to follow where it takes me. Comments appreciated.

(When I wrote this story, I had not seen The Train Job or Bushwacked, as well as the three unaired episodes. I had seen Shindig, Our Mrs. Reynolds and Out of Gas only once, at the original airing. So, there are mistakes. I hope you will overlook them.)

He stood slowly, stretching muscles stiffened by sitting too long in one position and headed toward the kitchen. It was still too early for anyone else to be up and about. Ship’s time almost never coincided with time in the worlds. They often just adjusted ship’s time. No sense in people having to lose sleep just because they had stopped off on some rock. It wasn’t like Serenity really cared. Mal mechanically put the kettle on the hotplate. When it boiled, he threw a handful of tea into the teapot and filled it with the boiling water. While it brewed, he headed for what laughingly passed for a bath.

He returned to the kitchen to see Kaylee getting bowls out of the cupboard. She looked up at him with a sad smile. “Hey, Mal,” she said in a small voice. She turned to add a bowlful of grains to a large pot on the hotplate. “You hungry?”

“Not much, mei mei. You’re up a mite early.” He poured them both some tea while she stirred the contents of the pot.

“Had trouble sleepin’. She frowned. “Mal, why’d that man have to kill Nandi? There weren’t no purpose in it. Are those girls gonna be okay?”

He put an arm around her shoulders and squeezed gently. “Some folk just have to prove themselves by beatin’ up on the weak, or killin’ ‘em. That ho-tze de pigu felt he was important only when he was hurtin’ others.” He paused a moment. “I expect Petaline will be able to keep those girls in order. She seemed a right natural,

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 02 June 2003 05:52
BC

Jayne really is just a big kid. I guess the old man is buying presents for his daughters, unless Mal's suppose to bring a husband back for Katie.
Monday, 02 June 2003 14:15
This is a fun story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Wednesday, 04 June 2003 01:44
Shiny!

I can see this one unfolding, really liking the tone, everything feels true. And River certainly could use a little fattening up.

Can't wait for the next installment.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 June 2003 03:20
This could easily write itself out as a script. I could picture watching this unfold.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 June 2003 03:20
This could easily write itself out as a script. I could picture watching this unfold.
Tuesday, 10 June 2003 05:13
Your pacing is good, and the story is most shuei.

I really like what you are doing here with Jayne and Inara...great characterization.

Badger
Saturday, 28 February 2004 21:24
I'm so glad to see that Mal and company have some real, honset-to-goodness friends in the 'verse...Great story

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